Oh god... your actually going there, aren't you...

I swear to god [or whatever you think is important], this better not turn out to be another one of those harem crapfics that plague this site...

I want Ozpin to die, that's what I want.

I hope you screw over Ozpin and Ironwood, my favorite fics dangle what he wants in front of him before snatching it away. Arrogant pricks think they need to stick their noses in business not their own, why would the council even need to check with Ozpin, he's a school administrator, not a city planer or government official.

After around four years the story has finally gotten past the intro arc. I like the writing and the characters, but I am very, very confused as to what direction this fic is wanting to go. Despite having almost 50K words, it feels as if barely anything has happened at all.

Thank you for the chapter!

Very nice, but a couple things. These are just suggestions, and you can ignore it completely if you really want to.

1. NP vs new Grimm hybrid/Auras- Noble Phantasms are "crystallized legend"- if it's going to be overcome by something, it should be pretty bullshit. If you have a plan to explain this later, could you just post a notice for it? Some other commenter was acting like a brat about it. If not, maybe do something like Grimm and Aura being technically created through magic/magecraft from the Age of Gods.
2. OOC-ness: With the addition of "Butterfly," you can justify some flashbacks/talking about the past, maybe create some scenes where divergences that explain the OOCness become evident.
On another note, how far ahead do you plan?

I love fics like this where characters open a business.

Just kill torchwick

Axccel the Grimm didn't overcome gae buidhe curse it healed after it broke gae buidhe as the spear was broken so the curse could no longer take effect

Oh boy this is gonna be interesting

This is gonna be good

Wonder what else will occur

Enjoyed how sweet it was in the end

Pretty good chapter here