So one update every 2 months?... OK I've seen slower...

Wohoo i luv it... This is so awesome... Can't wait until the next chapter...

While it is long chapter, the update is too long.

And so, everything exploded, the end.
But seriously, please continue this story, they will likely have quite the effect on certain events.

It's so goood:):):):):):):):)

Are the effects of Shirou using his magecraft only bleaching and tanning part of his hair and body or does it affect his entire body and will there be CFVY seeing as Velvet fulfills Ilyas requirement of bunny ears on top of her style of fighting having major similarities to Shirou?

Heh, loved it. :D Illya got a bit starstruck did she? Oh, I can't wait until she learns of Blake's own ears, she'll be even more in love (figuratively?)!

Also, looking forward to seeing how you decide to incorporate Shirou and Illya into the grand scheme of the show. I'm just guessing that "Breach" will play a part in it.

Thanks for the chapter! I had been hoping to see more of this story, and I'm glad it hasn't been dropped. I really enjoyed this chapter and I'm excited to see from Shirou's POV in the next.

Not bad, i would like to see more of it.

Those three have no idea, but they just jinxed it. They jinxed it! The White Fang could go and try to steal things at any time and those three will have to do fighting without their weapons-or just grab whatever is at hand until Shirou arrives to save them.

Aha, so Illya is the Winter Maiden. Yes! That means she's powerful, with any hopes, she knows how to fight with her powers.

Though I'm curious if Blake or Illya will tell Shirou about what just happened. That will definitely get him to reconsider to keep Illya in the store where he can keep an eye on her, and then maybe Blake could take over the flier job since she would feel bad for Illya. Or you know what, why not just spread it in Beacon, since all the Huntsmen are there, they would like for a quick cheap service.

And don't worry, your Yang was good. Teasing in the right amounts.

I like the concept, but I don't necceralily like where I think the plot is going in the future.

It was such adorable moments between Shirou and Illya. It made me go "Daawww." And I still see she's trying to pull her moves on him.

This chapter also made me think that she is the Winter Maiden. At least I think, because then why would her life be in danger. She's not even an actual faunas-which only makes her more adorable _

How strong is this Shirou though? He was very hyped in the beginning from what I understood.

And Schnee has progressed far if she was able to be nice to (Faunas-disguised) Illya.

Interesting stuff looking forward to more

a lot can go wrong

Just and okay chapter.