it would have been interesting if illya really was a faunus

Nice story
one more pls

Very interesting! You have my attention.
I hope you continue it.
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I like it, another!

it was good and is this hf or fate route shirou?

It's a bit awkward when you know Illya is older than Weiss.

looks good keep it up

I like the premise. I am looking forward to you continuing this. You have yourself another follow.

I think that this chapter turned out very well, and the inside jokes Illya and Shirou made wee great as well. I look forward to future chapters.

Rare to see a fic with Shirou and Illya together, at the beginning when Ruby asked Shirou about the shop keeping a stern and neutral face for Shirou seems out of place especially for someone who just opened shop and getting its first customer and Weiss doesn't seem to be one to fall for the "cute girl" technique but otherwise great start and i hope to see more.

Not the most interesting of starts, but you write Illya well and the concept behind the story is good.

You know the first thing that came into my overworked brain when I read the title was sabaton Swedish Pagans. High caliber firearms are always welcomed and needed. Glares at bears coming down from Canada to eat my livestock, stay the fuck away or I'll kill you and make a rug out of you. Little do the cast of rwby know that they're dealing with a man who's fate is to die on a hill of swords.

Amazing more plz

Very good story.
A weapon shop and a pair of siblings.
I guess the next customer is blake

SO CUTE and naming the store ubw ha more please :)