Reviews for A Brothers Love
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 15 . 7/14/2017
dont ya just love when a character dosent follow the rules and does what they want and not what u want...I see what your sayin if your mind continues to tell you something over and over(aka Voice ) you would do what it says. You may even hurt who you love with all your heart. just to do as your told. I fear Kili could be the one that may get hurt?
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 14 . 6/29/2017
Held by the Orcs mentally beaten down and possibly physically? Rilin I can see him be off tilt the father we go on.. I wonder if the "Voice" would try to get him to hurt Kili or Fili while their traveling? I hope protects them at the same time
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 13 . 6/25/2017
Yes he's freakin hot! any way wonder if Rilin will cause some major trouble with what he's remembering? will he cause any major fights with Kili?
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 12 . 6/22/2017
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YESSS I wondered who he was I had seen him on facebook /youtube video he Freaking! HOT! Brock he is sooooooooooooooooooooo Rilin! the hair! OMGGGGGG! I'm following on IG, Twitter, and Facebook now thanks for telling me his name ... the Troll scene bores even in the movie it was bla. You did jazz up it was great
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 11 . 6/18/2017
Yiikkees poor Fili glad he was ok Hope the boys get out of this mess ok .. The fight was scene was great (I just never was a fan of the trolls when I saw that scene it kinda dragged till a little bit in the movie)
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 10 . 6/15/2017
I hate the trollllllls! and how they had Bilbo poor Hobbit..Wonder what U have planned next for all of the boys ?
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 9 . 6/12/2017
hahahaha smug away giggling...I think I know what the secret is it may blow the family apart?
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 8 . 6/9/2017
hummmmmmmmmmmmmm the puzzle pieces are coming together wicked giggling...(I'll grab Kili hee,hee)
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 7 . 6/5/2017
You rocked it I loved it.. You had Thorin apologizing to Rilin i was reading every word hanging on every word I'm yellling noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo for that dam Wargs interrupting what Thorin was going to tell him my thoughts are still XXXX not sayin yet
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 6 . 6/3/2017
THis secret is teasing me I can only guess 1 thing but I'll wait and see for sure ..
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 5 . 6/1/2017
loved the memory it was spooky ...Glad the boys are are the same page now..But I wonder how long it'll last? Hope your head is feeling better?
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 4 . 5/31/2017
hahahah the Smaug part was funny it was a great part to toss in.. The secret may be looking at me right in the face but I'm still fighting a cold and migraine. hopefully next chapter i'll be better :-) I starting to get a couple ideas on the secret could be.. your doing great with the re-write keep it coming :-)
thewolf74 chapter 3 . 5/31/2017
I really think that Thorin needs to tell Rilin the truth. I want to know what the secret is. Please update soon...
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 3 . 5/30/2017
wayy better before they were kinda sing songee really irritating. the secret no idea at the moment.. but i have a wicked migraine so its hard to think .. great update :-)
Marmie chapter 2 . 5/30/2017
Finally got around to properly reading this rewrite. I really like it so far, I agree it definitely has a nicer flow to it and I love the longer chapters! Can't wait for more :)
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