honeslty your are not wrong it is a train wreck but i also must admit i is the most beautiful train wreck i have ever read you have my thanks for writing this and pouring your heart into this book i hope you can write more freely following this book and believe in your story more

kind regards my good sir
this is a complient btw

Sometimes the word order in this fanfic really bothers me. For example it's "are you okay?" carla asked him and "okay" carla nodded gently. not 'asked him carla' or 'nodded gently carla'. I don't understand how this is an issue when the fanfic is generally well written without any other grammatical errors.

man, this chapter was a hard read. so emotional

also, you keep mixing up the word order. in english it's always subject-verb soget back" Erza shouted, not "get back" shouted Erza

this guy needs to learn how to use the word "the"

Thankyou for patting Mavis's head

Yo, this story was a banger. On behalf of the often overlooked NatZa community, we thank you.

Dude this entire story has been awesome from start to finish! I'd love to see it continued if possible, you've done a really amazing job.

This is awesome. I like it

I actually thought this was a dang good story, you seem like a very talented writer and it shows. Please reconsider ending this story as I'm sure myself and many others would love to see it continue.

Really enjoyed it, was refreshing change from the power of friendship in the canon. Thanks for all the effort you put in over the years

Great Chapter
I want to see some natsu x erza moments
Not lemons jecceseraly

I am lost. Does Erza not cut Natsu during training? Why worry about giving her burns or blisters when medicine and healing magic exist for a reason? Injuries happen during training. Natsu has a point about people telling him to be more in control of themselves when they have the same issue.

Gildarts really has no room to talk though. He is being rather hypocritical. Way to make Natsu weak again too. Isn't the point of training and getting stronger to push past your limits and improve? He told him to treat it like life and death, he did so by trying to push past his limits. That is exactly how you treat life and death situations.

Natsu should easily be S-class here.. Like it shouldn't even be a conversation at all. That aside, kudos to Wendy for going for it! Also, they could make quite a fearsome duo, wind and fire! Hmm, is he already fully healed up now then?