The moment Natsu's about to fight the Nine Demon Gates, I play "DARK ARIA" by Hiroyuki Sawano. It goes so well with that scene.

To all readers who have read and loved this brilliant piece of work by kemor. I would like to officially say, Happy 1 year. I has officially been a year since the last chapter "Of Inner Demons" was posted. Really weird though cause it honestly felt like an eternity but it's only been a year. Last year I just like many other readers have read this master piece for a long time and every chapter made my day for one.

To kemor if this message reaches you, whatever it is you are doing through life, I wish you a great life the best of luck, and thank you for bringing this story to existence.

While me and probably many other hope that you would continue this story and if you don't we understand. But still we give you many thanks. Stay safe kemor

honeslty your are not wrong it is a train wreck but i also must admit i is the most beautiful train wreck i have ever read you have my thanks for writing this and pouring your heart into this book i hope you can write more freely following this book and believe in your story more

kind regards my good sir
this is a complient btw

Sometimes the word order in this fanfic really bothers me. For example it's "are you okay?" carla asked him and "okay" carla nodded gently. not 'asked him carla' or 'nodded gently carla'. I don't understand how this is an issue when the fanfic is generally well written without any other grammatical errors.

man, this chapter was a hard read. so emotional

also, you keep mixing up the word order. in english it's always subject-verb soget back" Erza shouted, not "get back" shouted Erza

this guy needs to learn how to use the word "the"

Thankyou for patting Mavis's head

Yo, this story was a banger. On behalf of the often overlooked NatZa community, we thank you.

Dude this entire story has been awesome from start to finish! I'd love to see it continued if possible, you've done a really amazing job.

This is awesome. I like it

I actually thought this was a dang good story, you seem like a very talented writer and it shows. Please reconsider ending this story as I'm sure myself and many others would love to see it continue.

Really enjoyed it, was refreshing change from the power of friendship in the canon. Thanks for all the effort you put in over the years

Great Chapter
I want to see some natsu x erza moments
Not lemons jecceseraly

I am lost. Does Erza not cut Natsu during training? Why worry about giving her burns or blisters when medicine and healing magic exist for a reason? Injuries happen during training. Natsu has a point about people telling him to be more in control of themselves when they have the same issue.