Reviews for Of Inner Demons |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I’m ngl to you I’m fiending for more, I’ve reread this quite a bit since I originally found it and it’s actually so much more compelling to me at this point than the original |
![]() ![]() Yo we're this close to a year since your last update, where you at? You good? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeesh I am happy there was no asspull of Grigol living. |
![]() ![]() Yo author, it's been months man, Where you at? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope u continue with this story, I just finished rereading it and it's still very enjoyable ngl |
![]() ![]() ![]() "asked him Erza" Brilliant |
![]() ![]() ![]() You were the first author in over 10 years to accomplish something no other author has managed to do; you made me cry. I cheered when Acnologia had his head ripped off, and cried with the last talk between Natsu and Igneel, and continued to cry when everyone knelt in respect. I commend you for managing to put that much emotion in your writing. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() while Im enjoying your story it does do something that a lot of story do if Lucy isn't a main focus which is side line all her spirits Loke And Capricorn would have been a huge help in the fight they are stronger than ppl give them credit for and she had plenty of time to at least summon one of them and tbh I'm not mad at you for it personally it just so happens your story was the one I decided to comment on |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the hell, is he dead or not? Is Natsu a dragon or not? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You can't just leave in a cliffhanger like this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() would you consider a further diversion of canon, not do the alvarez shit and hash out the END situation in this arc? Like Zeref shows up maybe while Natsu is talking to Igneel and it goes from there. Also, I honestly feel bad and stupid, I’ve been reading this for years silently and I’ve never felt up to snuff to comment, like what I have to say matter, but you’re writing is beautiful and elegant and regardless of where you go from here, I personally really appreciate this creative reimagining of Fairy Tail you’ve shared with the internet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() BACK AT IT AGAIN WITH THESE INSANE CHAPTERS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly dont give us alvarez compilation. That make it feel incomplete. Just give us an epilogue chapter about natsu and erza and thats it no more. The first arc was the only good thing about this story. The majority of this story was just rehash of canon and not even an interesting version. At least give us a whole final chapter with just natsu and erza. This whole time they barely even spend time with each other. Sorry for being harsh but majority of this story just pissed me off. You had alot of time to course correct since tenrou island but you kept on going with rehashing canon. What made this story interesting was the first arc. 10 out of 10 one of the best fanfiction arc in my opinion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would prefer that it was Natsu who killed Acnologia, but it was really cool that he died, and Erza will definitely be Natsu's only family for a while (At least until I see their children in this story I hope) but I'm very curious about what what will happen now (I hope it's a draconization for Natsu a demonic dragon) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter |