I really do not leave a lot of reviews but this fic is great! You keep leaving me in suspense and I have reread this fic like five times! I cannot wait to see how it all unfolds, only one Question and you do not have to answer of you do not wanna but are you planning on ending this with the tower or are you gonna keep it alive? Either way I respect your choice. Keep up the great work the community needs more authors like you!

This is by far the best fighting scene between Ezra and jellal. So glad it's very different from the rest of the stories here. Keep up the awesome work!

Inner Demons. I see a part of it now.

wonder if this beats is natsu getting as he calls it I AM FIRED UP NOW!
if so lookin forward to this next chapter :)

Damnnn. Epic chapter! Nice backstory fo erza!

Heh. Worth the wait. Even if it was a short wait. It was very good. Though Natsu is in the next chapter, right? Plus the him being captured confused me. He lost? Whatever, it will be explained in the next chapter, right? Finally, it is EXTREMELY difficult to crack a tooth clenching your teeth. Not impossible, though. About when is the next chapter coming out?

Great chapter and awesome fights.

That was awesome . Well done man. The battles were intense it's better than most canon battles I've read. Arthur was a beast. Dang, it's almost impossible since he can control time like that by slowing down his heart beat but somehow didn't get any side effects from it. Lucky for Laxus his opponent has already past his prime.
Can't wait for Erza vs Jellal next chapter. I have a feeling it will be deadlier than on manga. I wonder what kind of power this so called 'God'.
Keep up the good work and don't hold back.

Arthur says 1st Commandment: The God

Then Laxus says Arthur is the 2nd.

I am confused.

Epic chapter !

Watching the Commandments lose was superbly satisfying, masterfully done :)

Oh, curious, though, when are you going to add the Natsu versus No1? I can't wait. Anyways, whats up with Grey? Anywho keep up the good work!

Yes! This was worth waiting for!

I'm not much for reading and stuff, and i've never read a fanfic in my life but this is actually fun. Keep up the good work. Got the link from the SNK thread on reddit.

Took too long, I am sorry Kemor. Life got in the way again, and internet issues, again. Fucking Hell... alright, let's see here: You took my Crystal idea! That makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. Y'know what I like about your fight-scenes? They feel brutal, they aren't just brutal for the sake of brutality; they have weight to them. Reading about Mira driving her thumb through Dryden's eye made me recoil, I'm a Warhammer 40k fan, I'm dead inside! You still made me take pause at that scene, and her using Natsu's fire to take him down. Gray, Gajeel and Jolene's fight while good, I thought was eclipsed by Mira and Dryden's fight; I thought it was much more interesting.

I hope Mira's hand is just ruined, and it can't be healed; show consequences of that fight, and because I hate her in this story, she is a real bitch. But, I do like the end result of the Jolene fight the most, more fights in the canon should have ended that way. Props to you for doing something that most the canon, and Hell, most authors don't do. Characterization: Natsu getting excited about Wendy being a Dragon Slayer, and showing a glimpse of what he once was is still buried within him I really liked. It shows his character isn't entirely changed, and as I said before, he still retains some core traits of his character.

I really dig how Lucy responded to Erza's insistence she stay behind; really the whole scene was good I thought. Erza wasn't portrayed as a horrible bitch, Lucy wasn't out of character, and showed she can stand up for herself and be independent. Both brought up good points as well, Erza pointing out they are all her level at least, and the point of Master hand-picking her for the mission as a retort. I kinda hope Dryden's dead, and he is not going to come back from such devastating injuries, and being left in the water to drown alive. Whether he succumbs to his wounds, or drowns, I'd prefer if he died after this. Don't get me wrong, I quite liked him and his badass Dragon Soul TakeOver; but I don't like it when characters survive cataclysmic, life-ending attacks like it's nothing. Plus, this story is going for a more realistic and stark portrayal of fights and everything; I think him coming back from all that would detract from it.

I'm going to review chapter 11 next, but this took too damn long; so I went ahead and wrote this right quick. I'll address the next chapter in its own review, and hopefully soon, no ETA, because when I give one, it usually ends up eight or nine days later. Anywho, I'd like to reiterate that I really like the desperate nature you portray in the fights; people aren't just getting hacked apart or butchered for funsies a la Hellsing, injuries and grievous attacks have weight to them. DarkFics often just go the Hellsing or Tokyo Ghoul route of 'more edge, more violence, MORE GRIMDARK'! And they often suck for that reason. Anyway, 'til next time Kemor.

Jolene, Jolene, Jolene, JOLEEEENNEE!, Get kidnapped by Honsou you cunt,

-Svane Vulfbad