Really liking the story but you are triggering me with this one constant spelling mistake. disguist/ed. It's disgust, disgusts, disgusting, or disgusted. There is no 'i' between the 'u' and 's'.

Lol, arrogance get's him nowhere. He feels incompetent and weak since Natsu was able to handle all of them, and even he and Gajeel couldn't kill her. Funny, but dumb.

Nice chapter! I like natsu and erza moments. Btw, what happeb with erza's friends ? Such as simon, sho etc

Wow finally found a worthy natza story. You make a bunch of OCs that wasn't utterly boring but actually quite entertaining. I like it especially Luppi. This one right here has everything to become an evil mastermind. With his mind manipulation he can create chaos not only from the good sides but also from bad sides. If only he has more experience and power than you got a terrifying monster that could shake the balance of the world.
Anyway I hope you'll update soon. I can't wait to see what kind of power the so all powerful guildmaster Silva has lol.

Amazing chapter ~ I wonder what going to happen next of Laxus vs. Arthur fight, Jellal plan along with Erza vs. Jellal Possible rematch between Gray and Jolene and Natsu vs Silva

So Lacrimas and magical items eh? None of these people's abilities were what they seemed. They would seem OP at first but then their trick would be discovered. Maybe he messes with the mind's perception of time using their own magic against them somehow? And Laxus is immune because his magic was not there originally. Idk. Making theories is not my specialty.

this is so good! i really like how you've developed the connection between Erza and Natsu, and not just jumped straight into the romance. I cant wait to read how this will develop! :D

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Gods, do NOT apologize! Especially not for this! Both big fights were harrowing and fantastic. I was on the edge of my seat biting my nails the whole time, and I flinched every time one of the bad guys landed a bad hit. Sometimes a little uncertainty is good for the fans, it makes us appreciate the times our favorites really kick ads, and their never-say-die attitude never wavers, but calling for a time-out reminds us they're still human. Definitely keep writing please!

Amazing chapter with amazing fights. Though I understand why you had Gray and Gajeel lose, their fight should've been a draw or one where Jolene couldn't walk away from.

You might quite possibly be the best fanfic writer I've ever seen at combat. Given the fact I've been reading at least one new fanfic every day for three years... Bravo.

Great chapter. I loved the fight choreography. And in my opinion: Gray and Gajeel didn't lose, they made a tactical retreat; which was a wise decision on their part given the severity of their wounds. I'm glad that Loke opened his own gate to save Lucy from Luppi's "Mind Control"; I hope that Loke lays a Royal Celestial beat-down on his punk ass. But Lucy should've known that something wasn't right when she found Luppi based on his appearance being so much better than the others that she and Juvia had already rescued.

Nice chapter !

Under normal circumstance, I would say "No Satan Soul Sitri?! Triggered!" But the fight scene was really good so I forgive you :)

Great chapter! I can't wait for more!