| Reviews for Of Inner Demons |
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   Yuizo chapter 1 . 7/10/2017 Can't wait till you update |
| Ace chapter 4 . 7/10/2017 Just got one and saw it's updated. Hell yeah! Time to read some amazing fanfiction ;D |
| Horizxn chapter 5 . 7/9/2017 Loved it! :D |
| Z-Breezy chapter 5 . 7/9/2017 When Author says they don't like a chapter they written, what are expectations for the reader to like it. Your obviously one of those writers who don't like a super strong protagonist, but for Natsu who's been along for so long, is on a mission to kill I suppose obviously very strong enemies, how powerful is he. |
| Kazuka746 chapter 5 . 7/9/2017 I think this chapter was just fine ! No seriously, it was great ! I'd love to see Luppi, Jolene and Grigol die a horrible death though... If you thought something was off, then what was it ? Cause I sure don't have any clue. |
| Meazm chapter 5 . 7/9/2017 Great story ! |
| WolfGaming chapter 5 . 7/9/2017 Seemed fine to me. Can't wait for the fight! |
| Xperior chapter 5 . 7/8/2017 Woah...was not expecting that. |
| Dank Dang chapter 5 . 7/8/2017 Nice chapter! I really enjoyed the second half of the chapter, but I have to agree that the first half could've been written better (didn't really like the part with Makarov and Cobra. The way you made Cobra talk felt too forced, like you had no other choice/reason to make him talk). However, I've been enjoying the story so far, so keep up the good work! Can't wait for the upcoming chapters! |
| Angryhenry chapter 5 . 7/8/2017 Not bad! |
| Ace chapter 4 . 7/7/2017 Really enjoying this story so far. Love everything about it Nd it's really good. Keep it up. Hope to see new chapters soon. |
| An Amber Pen chapter 4 . 6/28/2017 Of course, throughout all this heavy stiff, leave it to Natsu to make at least one goofball comment. You can't ever get rid of that. Well, you can justify the personality changes with not having each other's influence growing up, plus the weight of Seven Commandments hanging over Natsu seems way too big for even him to gloss over. Definitely keep writing! |
| NicholasAlexanderakaAlaskas127 chapter 1 . 6/27/2017 hell yes keep goin |
| thehappy chapter 4 . 6/27/2017 Really enjoyed the chapter! Nice conversations between the two. Hope for more soon! |
| Angryhenry chapter 4 . 6/27/2017 Awesome! |