Good shit man.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Good chapter. Can't get enough of em!

I love it

I really want to know more about natsu's past now colour me intrigued great chapter

awesome chapter

Way to keep us on our seats with wondering what's going to happen next. You have a talent for this. I can't wait to find out more. Keep writing.

Wow that subplot in the drama so Drak mages have taken root in the highest positions of the magic council and they want Natsu not dead but out of the way so there plan is successful.

Nice to see Erza realised she handled that situation wrong and it seems like she'll end up being the second thorn for these seven commandments if she starts following Natsu around.

I created this account just to follow this story you my friend have created a badass story

It's totally a great chapter. I wonder that Erza let a leg deep in darkness is interested in. Btw, lock up... scar in her stomach confuses me. Can I ask for sure, this Natsu and Erza pairing right? Well, the scar in stomach makes me feel she looks like his mother...

This is a very good story so far. For a relatively new writer, your dialogue is very clear and fluid. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Again great chapter! You are a very skilled writer and I hope that you will continue with the story and update as fast as possible! I'm very curious about the seven commandments and am looking forward to their meeting and the romance to bloom~! Very impressive!

Great chapter! Can't wait for the two of them to meet and find out what the seven commandments. Extremely curious, but glad for another incredible chapter! Btw you are doing great as a writer and prove yourself to be very skilled!

I am curious how Natsu would have done if he wasn't blindsided at the start of the fight how much better he would have faired, he should now be expecting people after him.

Good shit