This is a awesome story I can't wait for more.

sweeeet. can't wait until the next chapter! thanks for your hard work :)

Man weither it came out of your ass or head it doesn't matter because this story is amazing in so many ways keep it up! P.S. keep natsu strong. i like seeing him kick ass.

Awesome second chapter. Mixing the seriousness of the battle with the guilt of Salamander was awesome. I also loved the idea of having almost 2 sides to Natsu. The first of course being the rogue mage that is hunting dark guilds, and the second being the wild animal, Salamander. Can't wait to see more.

The best story I ever read so far.

This would be a masterpiece for someone who was writing their hundredth fight scene. The fact that it's your first is just a testament to your skill. Keep it up.

Very interesting. Good job. Please continue.

best story ever

In honesty, Natsu was fine. He's not Op per say, he's just strong. He was getting hit, but what bothered me though is how he had to get stomped by Erza then get up and hit Gray, like really? Just forget him right after the attack. Like his liver was punched so hard he flew and spit blood. Help him... Internal bleeding. But seriously. He wasn't even fighting full force, FT just seemed like asses... In honesty.

Dude, I don't know what you're worried about this is the best fight scene I've read in a solid year. It was good enough where I had to put on some proper music for it!(ACDC and nuclear by Mike Oldfield), I'm not sure if English is your primary language or not but if it's not then goddamn, you do it better than most native speakers. This has been the best birthday present I've gotten so far I mean, technically this was released a day before my birthday (the 3rd), but I'm reading this at 1:30 AM so it still counts! The only advice I can give you is, if you plan to make this a decently long story is, don't rush the pairing too quick. That's one of the downfalls I often see is people rush the pairing too quickly, and then you kind of lose interest a bit. If you want a good example of it done right you could always check out Fairy Tail Back in Time By "Devil Snake Boy" That's all I have to say. Thanks for the unintentional birthday present. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow. This is really hard for him. Anyway, thanks for updating and I want to see their reaction together, but somehow Mira tries so rough. Idk

Wow, this is such an intense chapter!
I absolutely love your writing. I hope you continue to do so, and I can't wait for your next chapter!

*stares at screen utterly stunned* What the heck did I just read? *suddenly begins to vehemently stab the 'follow' button* I MUST HAVE MOOOORE! I mean, holy crap, you...with the armor, and Mirajane...Gray and Gajeel were...and the girls just... ssssnkksgahkdbjsk! I'm speechless! What on Earthland has our boy been through?! I must know! Please keep writing!

nice i liked this alot hope to see more of it

That fight felt very intense while reading, well done.