Reviews for Bird of Prey
DarkJackel chapter 14 . 3/1
Well it seems that Rin has had a rough time of things. Hopefully that will improve, though I do hope that Kuro monumentally fails to talk her down from tracking him down. There are so many things that could go wrong it tickles the expectations.

I can only imagine that eleven years in isolation will have strengthened Rin's... ludite tendencies. All the more pleasure in her storming Shin Tokyo and having her interact with sekirei.

Oh I do hope that Karasuba is going to drop the news of her little bundle of blades on Musubi. Maybe even go full proud mother with the video of Kuro's fighting. I can only imagine she will be the only one in Izumo Inn to receive the news well. Miya may well take it the worst since she would have wished to have Takehito's children. Of course I could be completely wrong but that is part of the fun in speculation. The person they might imagine Kuro to be before meeting her could make for some wonderful dissonence.

So they are going after Shiina, oh I do hope he still ends up in Yukari's clutches. That said part of me hopes that things get out of hand enough for Kuro to be forced to show a bit more hand.

On the topic of those three other bodies you alluded to in an earlier chapter, I cannot help but think that it is the lack of a soul that has caused them to fail to activate and we all know where there are a few of those lying around. Once that comes out one cannot but imagine that Waver's loyalty to his king would compel him to attempt to give him the rebirth he sought in the Fourth Grail War. However such an act might leave two other bodies out there for any other Heroic Spirits that want to take another swing at the mortal coil.

Anyways thank you for your hard work. I hope you will see fit to continue this work along with your other endevores.
BeoWolf666 chapter 1 . 1/18
Please don’t abandon this beautiful piece of work
Shinigami200 chapter 10 . 1/2
The first phone with internet came out in very early 2000 stay noght takes place in 2004 so its not like Shirou should be completely unfamiliar with them
yesyesyes1212 chapter 14 . 1/2
Rin can force Shirou to become a magical girl and take pictures of him as punishment for being himself, dude living his life like normally but still get yelled
yesyesyes1212 chapter 11 . 1/2
Damn this was good, i hope you will update this again
eliottmilloismorillo chapter 1 . 11/11/2024
Really good I wish you could continue
ManticoreBlues chapter 14 . 5/10/2024
OMG I love this fanfic so much!3 i'm si sad this hasnbeen continued/finishedi hope you decide to continue this one day against all the odds! in the meantime i look forwarda to checking out your other fanfics!
Zephyr 278 chapter 3 . 4/5/2024
haha 404 not found
AidenJacksonSmithDSBB chapter 14 . 4/2/2024
Welp Shirou's dead, I bet he can feel that from all the way in Japan
Ariadne Venegas chapter 14 . 5/24/2023
I would love to see what would happen when Shirou call and find Rin.
Also shirou is Cloe from Prisma Illya?

I hope you can continue this was amazing.
Haseo187 chapter 14 . 5/22/2023
I wish there was more chapters of this because it was fucking awesome so far.
ladrod23wo chapter 14 . 5/21/2023
Mm disculpa algún posibilidad de que vuelva a activar la historia, me quedé con ganas de que si
The Beast of Sanity chapter 14 . 5/8/2023
Came back and read this one through another time and gotta say it’s a shame you dropped it. I’d love to see this one come back to being updated. That being said thanks for what you have put out for this story and I wish you the best with your current works.
ShiroTsume chapter 14 . 4/25/2023
It's weird to go back and read this story so many years later... and God of War Ragnarok is actually released.

Always wanted to see the reunion between Rin and Shirou... especially since Rin is very likely Shirou's Ashikabi, which can only be hilarious.
Darkrai Mier chapter 14 . 4/7/2023
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