It's over already?! Booo!

Oh, so good to see this again. Great chapter you made. Exited for more as always.

Will this lead to a redemption-arc for Jasper? That would be interesting.

This was not the turn I was expecting. A little disappointed he won't be hanging out with the gems as much now but now Interested to see more and how this plays out.

Wow, Jasper AND a giant mutant gem? He's got his work cut out for him.

Still good stuff. Real emotional character building there for everyone. Now that you mention Jasper, I definitely want to see him fight her and see how things go. Awesome work.

Well, I quit. This story is no longer going In a direction I like, I quit.

Awesome. Nice to see Emmet settling in, and worried about what he thinks now that he made the Malachite connection. Great work.

This is awesome. Really excited to see more but I'm also excited for the fact you said you'll be following the shows plot as closely as possible. I do that for mine as well and I love stories that follow the shows plot. Can't wait for more and I wish you luck on future chapter developments.

Awesome. So excited to see what happens next.

This story has really hooked me. It's taken hold of me. I find myself checking FF only to see if this story has been updated. It's magnificent.

I am happy. I an really happy right now. He finally met Steven and I could only imagine how things are going to go from here on out. Awesome job.

This was good.

Nice shift. Wonder where this will go.

Wow, nice to see I didn't have to wait long. Starting to like number 2 more and more now.

Also, really? Really? Wow that's a nice way to introduce the mystery girl into your story. Awesome. More please.