Reviews for Wind Shear
XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 19 . 11/19
Overall, I like it. There were a few typos but no atrocious grammar or spelling errors. The characters were actually believable and had understandable motivations. The only real problem I had was that the pacing picked up around 3/4 of the way through and started to ramp through the roof. It wasn't unbearable, but it made the ending quite anticlimatic.

Other than that though, well done!
Stormshadow13 chapter 19 . 11/19
Awesome story.
Astra Myrt chapter 19 . 11/17
it so badass and i wold love to see a the boy who lives being tought by the stormchaser like if he (some how like 1 in 1000000000 chance like him in the battel of hogwarts but with Bellatrix on the good side. i just think that would be awesome
erik chapter 19 . 11/10
Still a cracking good (re)read, thank you.
TheDarkMan19 chapter 10 . 11/11
And you lost me. Harry is insufferable, and you desperately need a beta reader. Its a good story. Just too unpolished for me to keep reading.
Rune Tobor chapter 19 . 11/9

Sirius and Lily.

I went looking for that pairing, found TWO fics possibly worth reading.

Any chance you can write how they fell in love?

Jilly is easy to find, so are Severus/Lily, which I have ignored so far.

I cannot like Snape.

The story of your Harry and Bellatrix would be nice to read, please write it.

Thanks again.
Talonwalker chapter 19 . 11/11
Great story!
Tactical-Magician chapter 1 . 11/11
Good story.
suziq968 chapter 19 . 11/10
This is great every time I read it. Such a better world.
TheDarkMan19 chapter 8 . 11/10
Not a bad story. Could do with a lot less moralizing from Harry though.
MeConfused chapter 1 . 11/8
Why storm chaser tho
NineYetis chapter 19 . 11/3
Veejay2 chapter 19 . 11/1
A lovely fic by an amazing author.
RIP Jonathan McCready, may you find happiness and joy in the Beyond
PrincessMagic chapter 19 . 10/30
wow! this was brilliant!
PrincessMagic chapter 6 . 10/30
god i love Harry adn Charlues! So funnnY!

and little James Potter awww so cute!
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