|Reviews for Wind Shear|
| XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 19 . 11/19
Overall, I like it. There were a few typos but no atrocious grammar or spelling errors. The characters were actually believable and had understandable motivations. The only real problem I had was that the pacing picked up around 3/4 of the way through and started to ramp through the roof. It wasn't unbearable, but it made the ending quite anticlimatic.
Other than that though, well done!
| Stormshadow13 chapter 19 . 11/19
| Astra Myrt chapter 19 . 11/17
it so badass and i wold love to see a the boy who lives being tought by the stormchaser like if he (some how like 1 in 1000000000 chance like him in the battel of hogwarts but with Bellatrix on the good side. i just think that would be awesome
| erik chapter 19 . 11/10
Still a cracking good (re)read, thank you.
| TheDarkMan19 chapter 10 . 11/11
And you lost me. Harry is insufferable, and you desperately need a beta reader. Its a good story. Just too unpolished for me to keep reading.
| Rune Tobor chapter 19 . 11/9
Sirius and Lily.
I went looking for that pairing, found TWO fics possibly worth reading.
Any chance you can write how they fell in love?
Jilly is easy to find, so are Severus/Lily, which I have ignored so far.
I cannot like Snape.
The story of your Harry and Bellatrix would be nice to read, please write it.
| Talonwalker chapter 19 . 11/11
| Tactical-Magician chapter 1 . 11/11
| suziq968 chapter 19 . 11/10
This is great every time I read it. Such a better world.
| TheDarkMan19 chapter 8 . 11/10
Not a bad story. Could do with a lot less moralizing from Harry though.
| MeConfused chapter 1 . 11/8
Why storm chaser tho
| NineYetis chapter 19 . 11/3
THIS WAS AMAZING!
| Veejay2 chapter 19 . 11/1
A lovely fic by an amazing author.
RIP Jonathan McCready, may you find happiness and joy in the Beyond
| PrincessMagic chapter 19 . 10/30
wow! this was brilliant!
| PrincessMagic chapter 6 . 10/30
god i love Harry adn Charlues! So funnnY!
and little James Potter awww so cute!