Reviews for Wind Shear
Zamia chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
Love a good blood and gutzer. Excellent start. Harry will definitely be having some fun. Good one. Cheers.
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Puidwen chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
Interesting fic.
SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
Very nice story start. I've bookmarked your novel to buy at the end of my current reading queue (2-3 weeks).

Is Harry ready for Voldemort himself? He'll surely be in the next attack personally.
pasokditto chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
I've got a feeling about this story...that I'm going to enjoy reading this story. Brilliantly done. Update already.
Byakugan789 chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
Neat story. I recognize elements here and there, but it's a lot more fun just in the first chapter than most of them.

on the platypus, that's probably part of the ritual because the only thing people agree on is it's half one thing and half another, but often they can't agree on what things it's half of. That confusion as a cohesive whole would make it a good reality bending totem. A figure of transitions, so to speak.

point of note, the way you described things, wouldn't these two attacks have taken out nearly all of Tom's forces? He only ever had a few dozen at any given time and you've written the core group getting slaughtered, and those who would become the core group getting slaughtered.

Unless I'm misreading?
Valiryo chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
a nice start, looking forward to more!
troublefound17 chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
Okay you have a good handle on Bellatrix... a women who enjoys powerful men... that explains much. And with a that a good job well done and I'm waiting for the next chapter already! Keep up the good work! Also gonna buy a book Mac!
Kamiyo chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
finally started to post it here? it was really inconvenient to read it on that forum
SneakyDevil chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
Ah? Is this a new story I spy? A non-oneshot perchance? Excellent.
vyoom chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
A fascinating start.
SakuraKoi chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
so good
ToshimiOkami chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
This is bloody magnificent. Hope theres Lee soon
sertry chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
Amazing!
xXxGhostRiderxXx chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
A fine start. Some of the magical words are spelled wrong and Harry is a bit of an edgy sue... but tbh for these types of fanfictions he's probably still less of an annoying sue than usual.

So interested is seeing where we go from here.
darickb chapter 1 . 5/31/2017
I do love a Harry that takes no prisoners! An excellent start and a great read! Cheers!
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