Reviews for Diamond In The Rough
Kraven the Hunter chapter 4 . 6/23/2017
The zoo's nice and all, but Greg would never feel at home there. He's a free man who wouldn't take to a place where every decision is made for him and there's never any element of risk in daily life.

Please tell me resolving the cliffhanger in "Faded Blue" is next on your to-do list.
TheDekuWhoLaughs chapter 4 . 6/23/2017
I loved the chapter ;)
Bomberguy789 chapter 4 . 6/23/2017
Darn, now I'm wondering how the other gems that are probably on Blue's ship feel about this whole thing. Or how they reacted to Blue wanting to make Steven
Nick Foolery chapter 4 . 6/23/2017
LLLLLIT FAM
Drunken Hamster chapter 4 . 6/23/2017
Can we get the tabs and the tempo and all if that for this song? I wanna know how it sounds. ~Drunk
Abandoned Dnidisnhdidjsb chapter 4 . 6/23/2017
Nice chapter!
Nick Foolery chapter 3 . 6/18/2017
i love this so much
shadow chapter 3 . 6/16/2017
I liked the chapter!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/15/2017
Hey I have some ideas there for your fanfic xd, you could use the theory of the agreement between pink and rose, ai the rose reveals that apink never lived and that was just saved for the right time and all that blablabla of plot twist
PandaChan915 chapter 3 . 6/15/2017
The feels are so intense right now! This chapter was a bit too close to home for me as I had a similar conversation with my ex. It's eerie how similar it was so I definitely connected to this chapter. Its nice that Greg is letting Blue try and discover what loving a human is like. I can definitely see his frustrations because I can easily picture Blue being so carefree and intrigued by all of these little earth practices and seeming to not take things seriously. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter (to both stories!)

P-Chan
Bomberguy789 chapter 3 . 6/15/2017
If he walked away, how was Greg close enough to pick up the CD and put it somewhere else, without moving from his spot?
Champion Joel chapter 3 . 6/15/2017
This chapter was so beautiful
Abandoned Dnidisnhdidjsb chapter 3 . 6/15/2017
Great chapter!
DracoKing30 chapter 2 . 6/14/2017
cant wait for brand new chapters
CrimsonTale chapter 2 . 6/9/2017
I must say, you guys have certainly captured my attention with this magnificent story. I'm presently reading Faded Blue, but it's great to get a prequel to such a wonderful tale.

The very idea of Blue meeting Greg, instead of Rose, is one that deserves to be explored. After all, I did feel that they developed a connection during their brief conversation in canon. And so far, this story has done a great job of portraying such a notion.

One thing that really stuck out (to me) in this chapter was the concept of a Diamond's pefection. In gem society, they are considered flawless brings; therefore, any action or decision they make is inherently perfect and just. This tied in well with Blue's shape shifting. At first, she was uncertain of breaking the rules about changing one's form, but when driven to change, due to a need to fulfill her personal desire (getting a closer look at the book), she quickly abandoned a societal norm, justifying it with the perfection of a diamond. But this only shows how fragile and meaningless these rules are, when they can be so easily broken.

Anyway, that's my personal take on this chapter. Fantastic job, and keep up the good work :)
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