This is garbage.

What else am I supposed to say after seeing an MC who has pretty much enough power to punch Endbringers, yet she still lets three (as far as she knows) unpowered teenage girls bully her.

What am I supposed to expect from this kind of MC? It's not going to be good. She is not going to accomplish anything with this attitude. Hence, it is chapter 2, and I already know this will go nowhere fast.

I am sorry, author. I don't expect a hypercompetent Mary Sue. But this is just stupid. You are one of those fatass idiots who sit behind their PC, giggling to themselves about writing 'TaYLor iS sUfFeRIng' fic when you most likely never suffered in your life and don't have any idea how a person in that position who suddenly gained power would react.

In the canon? She had insect control, and she thought it was useless. Here? She knows the PRT can't do much to her. And yet, she still decides to quietly suffer? Because 'HEr MOthEr RaiSEd hEr BeTTeR!'?

Really?

Why do I even bother? Somebody who does this will not understand why it is a bad thing to do anyway.

Meh. You will have your audience. Good luck. I give up.

This is as far as I could make it. While the technical writing skill and the prompt for the story were both good almost everything else was a negative. Bad characterization, nonsensical plot held together by stupidly convenient misunderstandings and soap opera drama, terrible fight scenes, and content that doesn't match the story tags. I don't recommend this story, there are better worm fics to spend your time on.

I'm not stopping here, but this chapter and the fight was so bad I seriously considered it. Definitely gonna do some heavy skimming the next few chapters to see if the MC gets any smarter or if the plot gets any better to decide if I drop it.

Kinda hope that taylor becomes a part of the wards or something just cus i really wanna read a fic where she is part of them i mean there prob are some where she is a part of them but i havent read any that i have liked enough to read to a point where she migth join em

Why not first of Hasan?

What do you mean by telling that "Taylor have no range attacks". At least she can take Proto Excalibur and unleash couple of seals...

Wait! If she gives Scion the ring with someone like Artoria or Galahad, with a strong will but not a fucking sucker like Gilgamesh, wouldn't be them the ones in control, like, being able to take the control of Scion totally?

Maybe one of the chains? You know, Gleipnir was the last one, the one that worked, but the others were not weak... Although the spell in a rock is similar to the speel in a coin Taylor used before...

So the reason of Cauldron being useless so far is because how dependent they're of Contessa... Lore accurate.

I'm just going to say 2 things, Pretty sure Alexandria has to appear and deal with this, since it's an almost direct attack on the wards, even if she resigned (and that's another fucked up situation she let happen and needs to deal with, again, why no one is using Khepri's info yet?), and in the previous one she (or any other heavy cape) didn't appear for some plot reason, but that means the PRT cannot hold another blow of this kind, not if they want to keep the PR. Now the other one, is that the Medhall also have one of those lines and no one can't stop her from doing anything through there. TFTC

O wonder, besides the 10 rings, did she created a more specialized healing thing? Like, she almost died several times, I would think that Alexandría must realise that they need her, so her health is the most important thing to take care and an Avalon lite would be better than nothing, and already gave an order for her to forge one, just another safe...

Why TF Aegis was dressed as a Military man, and what about their parents? Does all the Ward parents just decided not to be involved in their kids risky jobs?!

I'm confused. Why Tagg didn't asked about the future that Khepri had saw, that must be in the Info as well, or Alexandría, also what about Divination? I get it if she forgot between everything, but Armsmaster? Miss Militia? Dragon? Renick? Tagg? All of them? What about Dinah? She just disappeared...

Sorry for your lost buddy...

Why not a detective, pretty sure Holmes appeared as an heroic spirit in a youtube short, even if he's totally fantastic...