Buen trabajo hasta ahora.
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Good job so far.

Can't help but wish this story could continue. It's lore is very well meshed together and a unique angle of going about the lore taking place well before the original Mass Effect yet after Automata's conclusion. If you ever wander back to this site and read our comments. Author I know writing a story isn't easy, especially when life keep us all busy. But please, continue this story. I understand it isn't the most popular. But after reading so many various fanfics of varying quality I am certain your story is easily on the the most fleshed out and well-written stories I've read in over 10 years. I can only hope these words inspire you to return tho this story.

...Cerberus? Or the precursors thereof?

Sad that the story seems to be dead, it had a great understanding of the Nier universe, and an excellent retelling of Mass Effect early history.
The mysterious villain is really well done, and it allows to keep us on edge wondering how much it manipulated, is manipulating and will manipulate without anyone even noticing a thing.
The mixture of dread and hope from Nier automata is also well captured, making this story one of the best I've read.
With the hope that this story will continue one day

after reading the available chapters, it's easy to see who jackass and X5's Mass Effect counterparts are. or at least it is for me.
also a random android creation: Yorha model type Hunter/Killer number 47Declaration: Die, meatbags. Would totally want him in this story. for those who don't know the reference play some star wars games.
love this story and am hoping the author will eventually return to it.

Stupid Krogan.

The asari are kinda hot but I don't like that thing in their heads.

Bueno, los androides han entrado a un nuevo conflicto armado.
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Well, the androids have entered a new armed conflict.

Grendel es adorable.
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Grendel is adorable.

Me pregunto cuál es el plan de Jackass.
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I wonder what Jackass's plan is.

Siento pena por los androides que murieron.
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I feel sorry for the androids that died.

Interesante.
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Interesting.

Es lindo que no hayan destruido el huevo.
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It's nice that they have not destroyed the egg.

¿Quiénes son esos aliens?
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Who are those aliens?

"They had collected numerous genetic samples of early humans and related subspecies"

That is convenient.