My criticism: you din't updated this stories since too long time.

Oh man, I discovered Hell Hath No Fury the other and was extremely bummed that it had only been three chapters, so I was incredibly delighted to find this. Absolutely loved it, definitely feels like HHNF while still allowing you to to do your own thing. I'd love for you to do more in the future, just seeing someone pick up the ball and score with it was such a delight. Thanks!

Okay. I remember reading Hell Hath No Fury years and years ago and being majorly disappointed at it's death. Just stumbled across this an hour ago and binged my way through it without stopping. Really enjoyed it especially how Ranma is learning to be more aware of others feelings. Not sure how i'd like this to end but I hope for a lot more character interaction and development in future chapters.

Keep up the great work!

I'm really enjoying this story but yeah, I totally agree with that other reviewer who said the 4th wall breaking should be edited out. You aked why? It's the tone. You've set a particular tone and 4th wall breaking doesn't fit right with it. So it shatters suspension of disbelief which is what makes up the foundation of certain stories. Having said that, it's your story so...

Absolutely adore the whole Setsuna crushing on Ranma thing. Really hope that bears fruit.

Thanks for this. Even if its never updated again, it does feel like a semi-satisfying conclusion to this hilarious story/premise. Thanks again. Best wishes and stay safe :)

Okay. I know its been years. But thank you for writing this! I had to walk out of the room because I thought I was going to wake my girlfriend up with my laughter! Haha this is precious. A GREAT continuation so far. Great job, and thank you again! :D

I am so damn happy that you’ve written a continuation of this story, and I can honestly say that it feels like one contiguous story. You’ve managed to weave in different threads from the original that (while they may or may not have been intended to go that way) make it really feel like you wrote both the original and the continuation, with callbacks and elaborations on little nuggets that happened earlier. I’m really looking forwards to how this continues to play out.

This is really good, hope you're not dropping this

A very nice continuation of the original story, which I remember having read years ago. I was a little surprised at the way you introduced Ka-chan - I would have expected her to be a crossover from some other story, showing up at the very end when everything had been resolved to start the wheel turning again, in a "but that is another story" type of ending - but I guess this works as well. I do like the interaction between Ranma and Hotaru (although you might be making Hotaru out to be too young, see below, and Haruka probably should have argued for dating rather than engagement as the age-appropriate compromise) and look forward to the final confirmation that it was indeed Ranma that Pluto had stalked. However, Nabiki competing with Ami for scores seems odd; do you really mean to say they are in the same school year, and Ranma is in the year below the Inners?

Speaking of years, the original was pretty clear in placing Sailor V's old problems with Ranma two and a half years ago, in the early-to-middle part of her year of solo adventures, and the current events at the end of the S season (Deathbusters). You now seem to say that it was fours years back, placing current events after Sailor Stars; while that would certainly make it easier to fit the Ranma timeline into the gap (and add a new enemy, rather than let the static be caused by Ranma's chaos) I really think you should put a notice about it in your first chapter so that the change isn't too jarring for the reader. Also, Artemis' musing about other life forms in chapter 5 should probably sound different if they have already fought Galaxia - and Ranma really ought to know better than stroking the hair of a *14*-year-old Hotaru...

Eh, not to fond of the hiro-dai fourth wall stuff. That whole genre just irritates me. YOU may think it's good comedy, but it's not for me, and apparently not for alot of your readers. Shrug.

It's good to see this was updated recently though, and the length with this one was NOT a problem. Looking forward to the next update, and as always, here's rooting for Ranma and Makoto. Who knows, maybe Moon's rampage will be enough for Ranma to stop caring about the honor debts his honorless father hung on him. None of the three girls are good for him.

Though, if he wanted, there is a in genre way he could solve all three engagements legally...
Ukyo is registered by her family as a guy, so she marries Ranko Tendo.
Akane, as the primary fiance in Japan marries Ranma.
As Japan and China do not recognize marriages performed in other countries, Ranma marries Shampoo in Hong Kong.
Ranma gives all three of them kids and goes to teach the Tokyo PD and JSDF anything goes, while Akane takes over the Dojo. Ukyo runs her restaurant out of the school Ranma leads and Shampoo travels back and forth, liason between the tribe and martially active Japan.

Odd to see the normally irrational Haruka being the nice one, but as a butch lesbian, I suppose she'd be the one to understand out of all of them. Good that Ranma has at least one friend in this mess.

Nodoka and kasumi good? Lawful maybe, but good? Kasumi lets everything happen with rare excpetions, because having a personal in house soap opera amuses her. Lawful neutral, possibly lawful evil if you're uncharitable. And Nodoka wants to kill her son for something stupid her husband did. No way killing an innocent is good, even in DND's wacky morality system. Hell, I'd put ALL of them on neutral, and class by lawful, chaotic or neutral. Though maybe lawful evil for Ryu and chaoitic evil for Saffron.

Regardless. Nice chapter.
Fuck minako. She's got the same problems as Akane. Refuses to listen, jumps to conclusions, incredibly angry.
Heh... kinda hope He gets with Makoto.

ah, poor ranma. Nice shenanigins. I particularly like that Ranma has NO connection to the ancient senshi, but is totally messing up crystal tokyo.

Funny shit with the outer senshi.

So, went to read the original story, and I'm enjoying this continuation. So far at least. D