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Animeworld2.0 chapter 19 . 9/3 Hello, this is "Anime World."May I share your story on YouTube with an audience that prefers listening over reading. Channel link: Animeworldfanfic I will give proper credit in the description of your story, will also share video link under your story review for your view and we respect authors and their copyright. If you have any suggestions, such as a title starting with “What If” or any other preferences, I am ready to make changes according to your preferences. I would appreciate your cooperation. Please reply at your earliest convenience with permission. Thank you! |
dumbass chapter 11 . 8/27 hey uh remember stain he was fast asf despite not having speed based quirk so why cant izuku be fast as hell too |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/5/2023 So good! can't wait to read more! |
JTcatlord chapter 55 . 7/8/2023 make more of this comic I really love this story so pls make more |
280Cloud chapter 29 . 4/20/2023 I am so proud of you author. You could have taken the easy route but no, you stuck to your path and continued down it. Thank you |
280Cloud chapter 28 . 4/20/2023 I am so proud of you author. You could have taken the easy route but no, you stuck to your path and continued down it. Thank you |
Typomaniacal chapter 34 . 1/17/2023 Kaminari, my boy! I'm so proud! |
Typomaniacal chapter 11 . 1/13/2023 The Nightwing bits are really boosting this fic up my list of favorites. |
Typomaniacal chapter 3 . 1/12/2023 Instead of One for All... GUN FOR ALL! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2023 Ew gay |
Keithbear666 chapter 6 . 11/6/2022 Dissapointing weapon choice and dissapointing cliche. Yes let's give a normal quirkless human some sticks with special effects to fight off quirks that could make that approach useless in every way and form. In this universe where they made material, metal or cloth or thread, that is meant to withstand and effect quirks in certain ways, you could have used a weapon like thread similar to Lubbock from Akame ga kill. So much versatility while covering all range, plus covering a multitude of different situations. It would have been perfect, because it would leave his hands free when needed, have crowd control possibilities, if needed surgical precision, while being the best choice to handle rescue operations and maneuverability through different terrain. Added in with the fact that it could be turned into multiple weapons would add a unpredictable veriaty to his style. Now onto the cliche, i saw it from a mile away. Seriously you could have done a different approach, but no. You had to add bakugo to the equation like every other author that writes mha stories, and will probably make him gain from this as well. Added on just basically a different villain to take the sludge villains place, much earlier. On top of that you added the typical situation where the kid is kidnapped simply because he was in contact with the hero who made a mistake. The final difference is the hero involved. I'm not trying to be a hater, or anything like that. But it's just disappointing to me that so many authors follow the same routine in these situations, and most of the time they focus on improving bakugo in one way or another that they downplay Izuku THE MAIN FOCUS, so much so that it seems like nothing changed at all. That's the main thing that upsets me so much, what's the point of hyping up Izuku and saying that he "trained" or "improved" when you are just going to give bakugo the same and then have Izuku be overshadowed by him. Then that also ends up extending to the others as well. Then at the end of it nothing truly changed from canon other than they are stronger and more experienced. Added on that some authors state that he "trained" to perfection and could beat everyone but all might, yet have him make such rookie mistakes that he is beat by a trainee that hasn't had any experience in the field at all. It brakes the story for me. As such when I see the same trend my expectations are severely lowered. The weapon part is just my personal preference in wanting to see an author put it to use. It just seems so useful yet so underused. Seriously two perfect examples are dressrosa from one piece, and Lubbock from Akame ga kill. |
9999999p chapter 11 . 8/1/2022 you made izuku into nightwing |
Turtletipper123 chapter 21 . 7/31/2022 Marlo vs Nedzu for most intelligent animal? |
Turtletipper123 chapter 11 . 7/31/2022 Ah! Nightwing, I knew it had something to do with Batman, but I didn't think of Nightwing at all! Well that makes sense I guess because even though some versions of Batman had some Blue his thing is mostly Grey and Black and a bit of Yellow. |
MhaAddict chapter 8 . 6/12/2022 Why is U.A. spelt Yuuei? Also, why the hell is Principal Nezu called Nedzu?! |