Reviews for Whipped into Submission
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2019
That was so good ! Keep writing them like this ! Many thanks for making my day .
HugeSpikefan chapter 1 . 2/14/2018
Thought the story was pretty cute. you're right since she wanted it it was consensual. But I would call that Moore S & M then kink
spike'smate chapter 1 . 7/13/2017
good story
spankingfemfatale chapter 1 . 6/22/2017
Lovely! D I must say that I can see a change in your writing style since the last thing of yours I read, and I think it's become even more captivating. Your descriptions have become more concise, and your sentences more fluid. (Not that you didn't write well before, but you've moved up a notch for sure.) It was nice to see something from you from a fandom I actually know! LOL! XD I'm not typically in to M/f you know, but this was very sexually charged and very in character to a scene I could see coming from the show (if they got that explicit!) It's a nice blend of erotic and punishment, and the ending has that fun quirk that made the show great with poppy dialogue. It's been so long since I've thought about this show, this was a nice reminder :)
caseyrn12 chapter 1 . 6/10/2017
Well theres the rub eh.. Punish Dru so she learns her lesson n yet know it also gets her off so u have to walk a fine line... N spike way to step up to the plate eh.. Great job
otkcp chapter 1 . 6/10/2017
Dominant Spike! He's pretty cool when he's in charge. I loved it.