I’ve stuck it out for 11 chapters but I can’t stand it any more. This is pure unadulterated crap. Your Harry is a total wimp, your American influence is overbearing (really, pancakes for breakfast? Strips of bacon? Cheesy scrambled egg?) Did you even read the books?

ok great story so far . hope you are still alive and planning on updating soon.

Nice so far

I wonder what they found they think was so funny?

Ever going to finish this story?

You’ve lost your way. No follow up on the red masks. No need to kill Hermione’s parents. No real forward progress being made on almost any front. Only a year gone on the five year project and already 33 chapters. This is going nowhere.

Thank you for writing and continuing such a great storyline with very few issues that have never come up before that I've witnessed.
Alcoholism with Harry and being intervened I've never seen, and seeing Dudley in a whole new way.
Having Harry adopt a dog and making Hermione Chief Warlock was very shocking.
You continue to surprise me with each chapter made.
I so look forward to future chapters being released.
I eagerly await.
Take care and be safe!

I'm really enjoying the story more and more.
Thank you for getting Harry a puppy, and I think Patronus is a great name.
Onward I read.
Take care and be safe!

So far, I'm enjoying the story.
It has its intense moments and that's expected.
Since Harry ripped Blaise and Pansy a new one, how will the other Slytherins fare?
Onward I read.
Take care and be safe!

Last 2 chapters gave me mixed feelings. I don't know if you will continue this but know that i loved the plot and character development. It was well written and thought of.

About "own you" argument with Daphne and Harry.
On one hand from Daphne perspective there could be at the beginning some hesitation, uncertainty and fear. But after few months, their interaction and whole other shit that they went through, Daphne holding on Potter whole "own me" thing is stupid. I mean, does she expect that he will send her to Azkaban just because? Unless you are creating her as totally bitch that is going to manipulate Potter - what you suggest, or rather announce in chapter 33(paragraph with Harry James Potter). With "cold bitch character" emotional attachment and blackmail has a lot of sense, some more close to kiss situation "but we can't because you own me", "HARRY JAMES POTTER HOW DARE YOU have problems with coping with your death, betrayal of headmaster, deaths of your friends! So what, that I am playing with you?! Your friend just tried to kill herself and after all that bullshit we, without specialist medical assistance, are playing rehab and denying you your only coping mechanism? YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO CRACK AND SAY MEAN WORDS TO ME! ESPECIALLY THE SAME WORDS THAT I AM USiNG TO MANIPULATE YOU!"
Sorry, it just looks that bitchy to me. After all shit that Potter is doing for her and have to deals with because he is trying to be more than FAIR for her, Daphne reaction is really, really disproportionate.
I like a lot whole story, just last 3 chapters and this "close to kiss" did not seem logical towards the rest of the story.
UNLESS you really are going to make Daphne a manipulative bitch. But this whole things looks more like happy ending story.

It's a good story and I've enjoyed it. I can see why you put it on hiatus, though. The last few chapters REALLY were depressing. I had hoped for them to be moving forward, but you were stalled in the morass of depression and dependency. Did you really need to kill off Hermione's parents? She was already in a deep funk. I hope you will be able to come back and rework some of the last chapters and bring a more hopeful note to them. Also would like to know who the Red Masks are, why they are attacking Harry, and why the Aurors seem to be stalling.

I wonder what Kingsley would have said about the Red Masks.

Great storiy so far

I LOVE the story!