|Reviews for Under the Gun|
| LaPumuckl chapter 2 . 8/16
I loved this one in the contest, will there be more, as this isn't the way the contest entry ended either?
| Luvntwilight chapter 2 . 8/2
| Mistydeb chapter 2 . 7/31
Let's hope they can hide well enough until jasper and emmett get there. Bella seems to be handling this really well so far. Debbie
| sherylb chapter 2 . 7/25
Wow! I love this!
| leahreallyitis chapter 2 . 7/23
I do hope there is more! :~)
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/23
Oh! I've been waiting so long for an update!
I really love this chapter! There's action and there's a little bit of romance there ;) really love tough Bella!
Thank you for the chapter and I'm really looking forward for the next one :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22
| roxiegirl chapter 2 . 7/24
Love love love! Can't wait for more!
| roxiegirl chapter 1 . 7/24
No. Jared and Paul already? I see a big body count here. Loving this already! Thanks!
| Twifan1228 chapter 2 . 7/24
Really Good! Can't wait for more!
| shaz308 chapter 2 . 7/23
He's definitely bringing her into his world, for better or for worse.
| lovedwardalways chapter 2 . 7/23
I am happy you are continuing this I love this story. They have great banter
| cbmorefie chapter 2 . 7/23
| cbmorefie chapter 1 . 7/23
| JennBolden9598 chapter 2 . 7/23
Oh boy these two are awesome. Great chapter!