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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a story. Please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there, I agree that writing really is incredibly difficult, but I've really enjoyed the ride and your portrayal of a more grown-up and adult version of the time post-war. Life isn't easy, it most certainly is and does get messy, and things only get more complicated the older you get, and you've shown that in a really real and genuine way with your story so far. I've found the storyline just as riveting and whether or not you find time to continue writing, I've really enjoyed it! Thanks so much for sharing, you've more than earned a favourite and follow from me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just reread your story and I really love the way you write, I think you convey the mood and the underlying loneliness of the characters so well. I'm also loving where the story is going, can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you get the motivation to start writing againwish you all the best |
![]() ![]() ![]() ughh. Yuzuru is fucking annoying. He keeps crossing his boundaries between him and his shishou by asking too many questions. it feels super invasive and disrespectful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() your fic is good. perhaps too good, but unfortunately I don't like this type of fic |
![]() ![]() God damn this is fire af please update it. I want to see Narusaku going. One of the best stories i've read so far. |
![]() ![]() J'adore cette histoire je suis Fan de se couple merci quand la suite |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continua! Questa è la fiction NS più bella che abbia mai letto in vita mia... i personaggi sono letteralmente come nel canon e mi piace il modo in cui porti avanti il loro sviluppo riuscendo dove l'autore originale ha fallito. Le interazioni tra Naruto e Sakura sono così naturali... mi piace come hai reso Hinata una donna adulta in grado di discutere delle questioni familiari con Naruto senza che balbetti o altro (diversamente dal canon) e la redenzione di Sasuke ha il suo perché ma non basta per essere perdonato; ha bisogno di tempo e amo il modo in cui hai chiarito che Sasuke non ha mai amato Sakura e sta con lei solo perché lei lo amava... mi chiedo quale manga abbiano seguito questi SS tards. In ogni caso, aspetto nuovi aggiornamenti. Saluti dall'Italiano |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! YUZURU! I really hope he is still alive. Thank you for not giving up on this story. Even if it was difficult to write this chapter, please be assured that I liked reading it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, what happened to the ANBU that Naruto JUST said he had watching Yuzuru? And it was pretty bold of Sarada to just assume she could crash at Cho cho's without any warning. |
![]() ![]() I know the recent comments said that this was one of the best NaruSaku pieces ever, and I cannot help but agree. Sure, you're a bit on the slow side of updating, but I'm more than willing to wait if this is the quality I'm getting. Plus, they're getting unraveled. NaruSaku is life, and whoever disagrees didn't watch the show. Loljk |
![]() ![]() ![]() This like the only Naru x Saku story I can read. And by golly is it a great read! You can back with a vengeance on this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was a rollercoaster. Sasuke and Sakura were actually acting like good parents for once. Too bad it was too little, too late as far as Sarada was concerned. And poor Yuzuru. I hope he's alive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm hoping that Sakura uses her sensory jutsu she created. I'm scared for Yuzuru. |