Reviews for Clouds in my coffee
annakas chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
I loved this one (like the other three). The wording and imagination were good. Yohjis confusion is well written and his confusion over Kens I want to kill you look was well given. The tension is there. Damn I want them all to be happy *sniff*
FireKat chapter 1 . 3/10/2003
oh- very nice imagery. (i can't spell!) any way this is a very nice snapshot fic. i love yohji's confusion- totally priceless. maybe omi (hint hint) can help ken get over aya? ja _
Mookie 821 chapter 1 . 2/28/2003
I like your analogies - the clouds in the coffee thing was pretty cool (altho' it does remind me of a song).

The tension between Ken and Yohji isn't overplayed, but is obviously there. That Yohji caught an expression on Ken's face that looked like he wanted to murder him was priceless.

It's a snapshot piece, but I liked it.