Reviews for Harry Potter: Force Adept |
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JerodStorm chapter 12 . 3/11 im curious to whats wrong with his head when hes already gotten rid of the soul leech |
Mauricio Cuellar chapter 26 . 3/4 Es bueno autorizaciĆ³n pronto |
dennishoisington2 chapter 26 . 2/1 Would you please update this story! |
richdsils chapter 26 . 1/21 O.M.G 4 years without an update COME on! |
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 19 . 1/20 I would never allow the tournaments to be conducted as it is. I require official entry forms second I would require the rules to be put in writing for everyone to read and they must be read before filling out the entry form. Plus all the tasks must be spelled out not kept secret. So those who want to enter know what they are getting into. Thus making the students think twice before entering . Since Albus and those fools and the ministry continue to make the tournament a death trap. Far too often I have wanted to beat the living crap out of the ministry workers and the school headmasters and headmistress to death. For this shit. |
Galaxy chapter 26 . 1/18 Please Update. |
MattBlack chapter 13 . 12/30/2023 Has Hermione got dementia? She KNOWS that Sirius is innocent by now, and YET she runs off to McGee... I swear, it's almost as if you forget what you've previously written lol... |
MattBlack chapter 12 . 12/30/2023 It's weird pretty boy Cedric's "honour" allowed him to claim the win when thewinning guy got attacked. Hufflepuff should be demanding a fair rematch, either that or they aren't as honest as reputed... Also, why would Harry be without his weapons, when he already had a vision? |
MattBlack chapter 9 . 12/30/2023 Dumbledore and Snape don't need to target Harry specifically, as long as it's not poison... They can give everybody loyalty potions... |
MattBlack chapter 6 . 12/30/2023 Jar'Kai isn't a form in it self, any form can use Jar'Kai, it's more like an addition to the other forms... |
MattBlack chapter 4 . 12/30/2023 Meh so Harry will use the new code? The old code is better imo, especially for a wizard with the option of occlumency... If Luke followed the new code there never would have been any little Skywalkers... The entire Ruusan reformation was the republics way of putting a leash on the Jedi... They didn't like the influence the old Jedi Lords held... |
Tzarista chapter 26 . 12/29/2023 wonderful read, couldn't stop |
Ironcoil chapter 26 . 12/27/2023 Truly an amazing story, your ability to create a solid cause and affect that shifted canon away from typical events ks great! Youve built a great, more expansive, world here and i truly hope youll return to writing it. I for one will continue to wait. Thanks for an amazing read! |
Ironcoil chapter 20 . 12/27/2023 Love how you finished this chapter! Bonding Harry to a hatchling was amazing as they can now grow together. It adds more balance and offers other opportunities with the dragon instead of needing to find a cave for her to live in. Im really looking forward to the changes brought about by resurrecting the Pendragon line! Another awesome chapter! |
Ironcoil chapter 18 . 12/27/2023 Another grest chapter, your decision to have Harry enter himself in order to preempt the issues that would have otherwise occured was well done. Also, the creation of the multi part of your story didnt feel forced as some do and im really liking how its being done slowly. Really looking forward to seeing how Albus handles this Harry. Seeing his plans collapse while he tries to return them to his desired path should be amusing. Thanks for the great read! |