Reviews for Harry Potter: Force Adept |
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Ironcoil chapter 7 . 12/26/2023 Im truly loving the story you have created thus far. The support Harry is receiving from not only his ancestors but his dogfather is very well done. I always felt that if Sirius was given the chance to raise Harry after third year without the domineering Molly they would have helped eachother heal. Im looking forward to seeing where you go with this ans i must admit it has given me some really cool ideas to add to a story of my own thats still in the planning stages so thanks for that. Hope work isnt dragging you down! Thanks for the great read! |
marc chapter 19 . 8/13/2023 les yuuzhan vong vienes du autre galaxie |
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 26 . 7/5/2023 This is beyond epic, (I also sorta wanted Tonks to be with Harry. I love her character.) I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm practically bouncing in my seat as I type this. |
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 4 . 7/5/2023 I think the Old Oath would be best, it makes more sense to be than the New Oath. |
wiebenor chapter 26 . 6/30/2023 So... This story was last updated in 2020 and it's now 2023... That said, I speak now, to the author of this story, and say this, if you're still around, after the whole "pandemic" thing, and are willing and able, you'll have 1 person to read the coming chapters, at least, if not more than 1, should you decide to continue this... Seriously, this is a very good, and technically sound, story combining star wars with Harry Potter, and it feels almost finished with maybe 2 or 3 chapters left, if that. Also, I hope either dumbledore dies, or else is punished by The Force... This is just so realistic that I could really see this happening in the Harry Potter universe. Thank you for writing such a spellbinding story, even if it's still at least a couple chapters from being finished... Definitely following this |
j chapter 17 . 5/22/2023 I'm done. This is a terrible story and half is just from the books with small additions and still messed up |
pincho chapter 16 . 5/22/2023 I've refrained from saying anything but the whole patronus thing in this story has been very...lazy. |
sakurai.ryuu chapter 26 . 5/7/2023 why not update :( |
Currahee506 chapter 26 . 4/29/2023 More soon please |
stacygrrl2002 chapter 12 . 4/25/2023 How about an enhanced memory from his occlumancy studies and an ear ring to help translate if needed. Decent action scenes, liked him kicking butt and not holding back. |
LoveSwanQueen chapter 26 . 4/22/2023 I hope to post more chapters soon! I love this story ! |
AlexianBlithworth chapter 1 . 4/9/2023 Bruh, James, Sirius, Remus and Peter acted like the bullies in school wdym? lol |
shedges19 chapter 26 . 4/1/2023 more |
hyijinx chapter 26 . 3/28/2023 This is a fabulous story, and I really hope that you will continue it. I am really enjoying this version of Harry Potter. |
Bronze chapter 18 . 2/10/2023 Some of the funniest stories I've read are centered around H/Hr/LL. So, hopefully this story'll work out to where all three remain close friends for the rest of their lives. I can easily see Neville marrying both Luna and Tracy in a similar arrangement as Harry with both Hermione and Susan. It's a nice change of pace to read a story where Kreature is no longer the crazy insulting House Elf. I also like how H/K talks in this. I'm sure if Harry told him to kill all the Death Eaters and their families it'd be quite happy to do so. Fortunately for every one of them Harry would never do that as it'd lead to the Dark Side of the Force. Anyhoo, you know that old Moldy Voldy is in for a huge surprise come the end of the third task. This isn't the same Harry Potter he's fought several times before. All Harry has to really do is kill the snake then kill Ole Moldy Voldy and the war is over before it even restarts. Though I can see Harry pulling a prank on Old Moldy Voldy from a couple of other HP fan fics. Creating a bag on the inside of both sleeves, collect blood from several animals in the maze in them before going after the Goblet. Harry allows himself to be captured and when Wormtail cuts Harry's arm for the blood he gets what Harry collected. Once whatever comes out of that caldron calls his/its Death Eaters Harry can then chop them up along with Ole Moldy Voldy in his new form. Then go back and chop up the Old bearded wonder blunder who thinks he knows all. He ain't GOD and never has been, never will be! He's just an old man with delusions of grandeur. |