Reviews for Harry Potter: Force Adept
Bronze chapter 17 . 2/10/2023
Of course, the cowardly Death Eaters would portkey away if injured or killed. They are upstanding citizens after all. It would never do to have any questions asked about their so-called innocence after all. If it came into question, it would open a can of worms that the Purebloods DO NOT want truly investigated! They paid good gold to get away with their crimes. And they don't want to have to pay even more to get off the second time if they're lucky. Amelia Bones DOES NOT accept bribes and WILL prosecute any Auror who does. Now Fudge on the other hand would be more than happy to accept them and declare them innocent. I wonder just how much gold he has stashed form all those innocent upstanding citizens? Now as to Winky, she couldn't get a better master than Harry. She won't be ordered to take care of a convicted Death Eater being hidden by her master like Crouch Sr. did. She won't be used as a scapegoat to save his job as well as reputation either. Seeing as most of the world is right-handed, I guess they'll be calling the Death Eater who lost his arm to Harry's lightsaber lefty from now on. And of course, as the magical world hasn't left the mid-Victorian age (to be kind) they'll never match the arm they might've found to the Death Eater who lost it. The very idea of matching fingerprints would never be allowed by Purebloods. Seeing as it's a muggle world thing. In future Harry should go for the neck as then the Death Eaters CAN'T come back to continue their raping, torturing and murdering ways. It would also have the added benefit of removing them before Vulturewurst regains a body. On a different note, I've never understood WHY everybody insists that destroying all the Horcruxes BEFORE Vulturewurst regains a body is wrong. Even if he's in homunculi's form, once that's used up, he has no anchors to hold him to this plane of existence. And seeing as that form is dependent on Nagini's venom to stay in that form, kill the snake and he's just shit out of luck. I pretty much know why Good Ole Fumblemort doesn't want to do it. He's too damn fixated on Harry dying to think of any other way. I noticed in canon that Good Ole Fumblemort NEVER consulted any other magical race nor a Curse Breaker about Harry's scar.
Dalriaden chapter 24 . 2/4/2023
Super annoying how Harry always has to cave to the adults. Pretty much invalidates him having magical access to all the big name force users. Not like Revan and others wouldn't know how to play the political game.
midnightscar17 chapter 26 . 1/31/2023
Please update soon
Bronze chapter 18 . 1/25/2023
Well, Luna is always written as a strange one. As well as a Seer. In a few Good Ole Fumblemort was responsible for the death of her mother and the scrambling of her own mind. Her mother had something or some knowledge that he wanted but she had foreseen that he wouldn't use it for the Light. Luna is one of my favorites. She's just so fun to read. I really don't see how Good Ole Fumblemort can be seen as being Light. He does everything to help the Dark. He knew that so-called prophecy since before Harry or Neville were born and went about protecting both families in a half-assed manner. He interviews a woman for a job whose family is known for having True Seers but who herself has never had a true vision. When she supposedly gives a prophecy it's in a place where no truly right-thinking person would ever hold an interview! Every shady person in the country is known to frequent the place. Fumblemort could easily have held the interview in his office at Hogwarts where on one could've over-heard it.
Bronze chapter 17 . 1/24/2023
Of course, they had to blame the House Elf! Couldn't find the wizard who truly did it so had to blame someone or thing. Now Crouch was acting rather strange during the whole scene. It wouldn't surprise me if Barty Jr. already had his father under the Imperious Curse. I've got to say that Winky gets a far better deal than in canon. She gets a new family a hell of a lot sooner so doesn't start drinking herself to death.I'm not at all surprised that the Death Eaters had Portkeys on them to escape. The whole point of their march was to remind the public that they were still around and still believed they had the right to do as they damn well pleased. They were so brave that they tortured an entire muggle family for fun. Some of them are gonna have to learn to cast with their opposite hand as well as get a new wand. I'm really hoping that in the coming war Harry KILLS every Death Eater he fights. There's no sense in leaving them alive. They had their second chance and threw it away. Why give them a third or fourth chance to betray the rest of the magical world? They will. They're already proving it. There's no sense in taking out the leadership and leaving the foot soldiers to just continue to kill anyone and everyone they want to. They, as has been pointed out in many other fics are like rabid animals and should be put down for the safety of the rest. If arrested, they'll just buy their way out of Azkaban anyways.
Bronze chapter 16 . 1/24/2023
I was 17 chapters in before my computer decided that I didn't really want everything I was reading and erased it. Ya, I know about the history function but I bounce around so many stories some of them one or two shots that it's not really a help. But anyhoo, Good Ole Fumblemort must be going nuts trying to find out Harry's secrets! After all, he likes to know everything about everybody, and he can't do that if he doesn't know their secrets. I like Hermione as a Bengal Tiger Animagus. The first time through this chapter I failed to read the A/N and so had no idea where the Dragon form came from. The Pheonix form was also a great surprise. Most times I read that no witch nor wizard has the magical power to become one. I know Harry's gonna use his armor and lightsabers at the World Cup against the Death Eaters but unfortunately, he doesn't kill any. And of course, any that are caught will simply bribe their way out. Regardless of their being caught in Death Eaters Robes and causing trouble Fudge won't let any " Upstanding Citizens " go to Azkaban. Especially someone like Lucy Malformed.
LunaShadowWolf chapter 26 . 1/17/2023
this has been an awesome and well done fic so far looking forward to seeing what happens next hope this gets continued
Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God chapter 26 . 12/26/2022
Spoilers for the next chapter would have been welcomed considering this looks to be discontinued.
jimmy.oz chapter 14 . 12/9/2022
Well im a stop here if you ever decide to update i will read more. look forward if you decide to do it.
jimmy.oz chapter 13 . 12/9/2022
Could always make him turn into a Krayt Dragon but then again those are huge.
jimmy.oz chapter 12 . 12/9/2022
Would have liked the interaction of the others seeing the basilisk that went down to see it. especially knowing he had to face it and everything.
jimmy.oz chapter 9 . 12/9/2022
Technically him owning hogwarts could probably help him firing certain people and all. then again it might have to be an adult for that but could get Sirius to do it maybe later if he is free.
jimmy.oz chapter 8 . 12/9/2022
Just thought about it but with the force and all he divination probably would be useful. also should just kill all the dementors.
jimmy.oz chapter 7 . 12/9/2022
Surprised Anakin isn't one of the masters lol. also really hate the jedi code but i don't really like the sith one either.
jimmy.oz chapter 2 . 12/9/2022
damn would have rather him be a gray jedi than just plain light since i feel it needs to be both since too much of one side is never a good thing.
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