Reviews for Always In My Heart
Bloodrose0394 chapter 3 . 10/25/2020
I like the story ,however there are several spelling and grammatical errors,
Bookluv chapter 5 . 10/9/2020
Will Harry cut his hair?
wingnutdawn chapter 5 . 9/23/2020
interested in story but do not wish to join wattpad
Mary777777 chapter 3 . 9/22/2020
There are so many spelling mistakes, I lost count. And Twilight? Really? Snape gets a son and they sit down to watch Twilight? You do realize that neither one is a teenage girl, don't you?
misswitlock16 chapter 4 . 2/9/2020
i like it hope you add more
Guest chapter 4 . 2/15/2019
hail atleast he became edward after his death dont u think they r cool i.e. edward and bella
mumphie chapter 4 . 1/1/2019
Well, this is a good beginning - I hope you come back.
Nargelz chapter 1 . 12/3/2018
If there was lots of people willing to become spy why not let them and leave the snapes
Michellecole chapter 4 . 11/20/2018
Just found your story !Are you planning on continuing ?
If so I’m in .
vrani140 chapter 4 . 9/29/2018
please, continue
Loveanimelove chapter 4 . 7/23/2018
I love. This please update please
Guest chapter 4 . 7/3/2018
Use spell check please.
polly chapter 2 . 7/3/2018
here's a few tips to improve your writing.
cut down on the wordy paragraphs. try to shorten them.
you repeat, with different wording, the same thought.
you have a really good story, but it's too wordy, i.e. the paragraph about
severus' post.
get a thesaurus and a dictionary...keeps ya sane.
keep up the good work!
horsegirl2784 chapter 5 . 3/28/2018
Please continue this story! It's great!
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 5 . 3/19/2018
I am still intersting to read what will happen with this story.
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