Reviews for Moonflower
Encrouz chapter 1 . 3/6
Fic as a whole is really irratating. Inoko's off and on memory is one of them. Idk if it gets explained later in chapters cause I've dropped it at the start of the chunin exams. Ig it wasn't that bad but it's so stereotypical it hurts to read. The way she acted with Kabuto was so annoying. Couldn't even give a valid reason as to why she shooed him off like that. Like what? From an outsider's POV, it comes off as extremely disrespectful. She says that she trains a lot but there hasn't really been a chapter from what I've seen that actual focused on training. I read through the reviews, and there's literally no negative comments, and it's a shame that I can't enjoy this as much as other people have :(
skylover4life chapter 27 . 1/15
I hope you come back to this one day and I hope you heal from your troubles. I’m a about to read the last update and I’m really going to miss Inoko. She was by far one of my favorite oc’s out there. I love the slow-burn Sasuke relationship their building subconsciously. It’s more fluff, but I really love the way you portrayed him as growing more as a person here. Please don’t give up on this or yourself. Love this story to bits. It was a journey indeed.
skylover4life chapter 24 . 1/15
I frick freaking love your sense of humor. Beep beep I’m a sheep.
RatchetsGirl1 chapter 27 . 12/5/2022
I love this story so much
dragonslayer1524 chapter 4 . 5/23/2022
I saw the references to one of my favorite fanfics, this as awesome
Mink18 chapter 27 . 5/11/2022
That was an amazing first chapter, it’s realistic and her reactions are logical in my opinion at least.
Someone chapter 3 . 3/24/2022
They wait a few days before assigning teams as they have to get their if picture taken and such. Not to mention, you forgot that Naruto meets Konohomaru at this time. And Hiruzen shows Kakashi team 7’s place
Jubjub3000 chapter 27 . 2/13/2022
Thank you for this fix! I hope you revive this someday! And I wonder if the seal will still occasionally try and mess with her and push her towards orochimaru or something? Or will jiraiya be able to provide more help?
peiskosflames chapter 27 . 1/29/2022
I kinda love this, such a flesh out SI-OC fic. I love the relationships between Inoko and her family as well as her team, looking forward to the next update!
evqnescents chapter 4 . 12/21/2021
Is this the fanfic ‘Sanitize’ from Ao3? Aaaaa, that was a really good fic. Its not done though, i think.
violetartistic23 chapter 6 . 12/6/2021
didn't she already watch/read Naruto in her previous life? How cam she possibly forget about the iconic bell test...
tiffanyblue89717 chapter 27 . 10/2/2021
Oh my gosh this was so interesting! I really love the virus thing you did after she got her curse mark. Also I sincerely hope that this hasn't been abandoned.
Anon chapter 1 . 7/1/2021
OMG! I absolutely love this. Inoko is a brilliantly done character. And I absolutely love her relationships with the original characters of the show. Sheis intelligent without being overly so, and she actually has a personality outside of just training. Though, I feel as though she isn't really taking training seriously enough when her goal is saving her father and everyone she cares about. She could be working a lot harder, in fact she could be working in fuuinjutsu or kenjutsu since short range is her largest weakness. Not to mention fuuinjutsu is probably what could save her father.

Besides that, I think this fic is amazing and awesome. I love how each person has changed just a little from their original counterparts due to Inoko being there. I'm excited to see where her relationship with Shikamaru goes. Don't get me wrong, I love Temari, but I also headcannoned her as someone on the arospec and I think Inoko and Shikamaru would be cool to see. I can't wait to see what you do with SAkura since she isn't on team seven.

Really, I just can't wait to see what happens with all of these characters now that Inoko has actually changed some of the timeline.

Great job! This was an extremely pleasant read, I can't wait to see more!
Invincible Shadow chapter 27 . 12/29/2020
I LOVE THIS! Inoko is super fun and I love that she doesn't remember EVERYTHING about the plot, and she's also nicely human and her relationships are really fun. I can't wait to see what you do with the invasion arc and I'm curious as to how her training with Gai is gonna go! It'd be interesting if more people picked up on her chakra sensitivity because that could be a really fun scene, just like Sneaky Anbu Impersonate Surprised Pikachu Meme.
Take care and good luck with everything! Happy New Year!
KakashiSempei00 chapter 1 . 12/15/2020
wtf. why a chopstick.
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