Reviews for Moonflower |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter, good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() We wonder what it'll look like. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH HOLY FLIP FLOP This will not end well Ahhhhh! Thank you so much for the update! I’m freaking out |
![]() ![]() update! nicework. always love yamanaka. nice to see canon changes like this, nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit. From what I’ve gathered she kamiwari (I cant spell) with Sasuke yea? Woah. But Oro wasn’t happy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, MC wets pants and takes the bite for Sasuke. Read this a thousand times and it wasnt interesting the first time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story, I've really been enjoying it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to see how she handles Orochimaru. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She had plenty of time to push for training (knowing the Plot and that she would have LARGE DANGERS with 4 MONTHS), she has no right to go cursing luck and bad teaching later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All of it was expected, and she is in denial. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter! can't wait to read more :) |
![]() ![]() SI can only be so interesting, you've toned down everybody else just to fit your character into the story while basing everybody else... Naruto may be impulsive but it just seems like you ignore his own merits to up inoko... everybody is flat like they're not even characters but just NPCs giving off lines for a dialogue, the one time you didn't do that was with naruto and his clones at wave but even then that didn't last at all. And of course I found myself more interested in the story when you actually switched PoVs to Ino as well as naruto. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this, thanks for the awesomeness |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, nice chapter, good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this!~ |