Reviews for Oblivion
bulla705 chapter 18 . 10/31
love it Videl is a hoe
PanLover chapter 18 . 9/28
Gohan...damn man whore...I really hate him and Trunks...Please make a fiction where Finally Videl and Pan have happy ending!Let Marron and Bra being a bitch and being left behind...Gohan should die and Trunks will being totally single jerk where is no one want him...
SuperSaiyanPan chapter 17 . 9/28
Stupid damn stories...u make the worst character for Videl and Pan..they should have a gud guy with them...why Marron n Bra should have happy ending!they are the rea bitch!Marrried breaker!husband snatcher...i really hate that whore!
mary chapter 16 . 11/19/2014
For having so many reviews I must say I was sorely disappointed. Your writing was not too great. And why would videl want to kill bra? Eh... it's okay I don't think I'll keep reading to find out.
EscapeReality.98 chapter 18 . 9/24/2013
Lovely ending.
I love all your stories and happy you finish this one. There's only a Brohan fics out there that have been completed. :D
ShadowLDrago chapter 11 . 9/17/2013
Goku may be naive at times due to living alone for very long but he is certainly not stupid. Thanks for not portraying him as one. Let's just hope Goku takes it better then Trunks and Vegeta did, I'm not sure though who Chi Chi will want to hit with her pan, Bra or Gohan, I suppose though that I'll soon find out, ne?
DarkVoid116 chapter 18 . 9/2/2013
I really enjoyed the story as a whole and the ending wasn't necessary bad, just a little too simple given the intricacy of the plot. Yamcha being with Videl was a twist I hadnt foreseen.

Bra and Gohan make an adorable couple in the end... I really like them being together lol.

Pan really earned redemption which is nice to see. I like Pan and she was a megabitch for the majority of this story. Vegeta handled everything extremely maturely... I didn't expect that from him.

This was an amazing story! Excellent job!
DarkVoid116 chapter 17 . 9/2/2013
Pan deciding to come clean about Trunks really puts an exclamation point on this story. Now it's known to Maron that Trunks didn't lie to her and Maron and Pan have a genuine friendship. Goten remains hurt by everything, but Gohan and Bra are together happily.

Hell, Vegeta even relented and decided to give Bra away happily.

Excellent chapter.
DarkVoid116 chapter 16 . 9/2/2013
Well now Vegeta obviously knows that Geta is Gohan's son...

Videl is fucking crazy, holy shit! I never would've thought she was capable of murder. I think Pan would side with Gohan if it wasn't Bra who was his lover...

Pan and Bra still have time to reconcile their differences.

Yamcha did the right thing as well... I hope Yamcha and Videl can't raise Vita as a pair and Yamcha gains sole custody...
DarkVoid116 chapter 15 . 9/2/2013
Your version of Videl is devious and evil to the max.

Gohan pisses me off at this point, and Videl is fucking crazy.

The last domino that needs to fall is Vegeta discovering Gogeta's father.

I sense a change in Pan and Yamcha the next few chapters...

Excellent chapter...
DarkVoid116 chapter 14 . 9/2/2013
What the fuck is Goten doing?

He'd better have a plan of attack here... Might he have realized that Gohan and bra love one another?

Videl and Pan and Vita are one happy fucked up family...

I'm happy Gohan fucked Bra once again :)

Good chapter.
DarkVoid116 chapter 13 . 9/2/2013
There is no way that Bra can continue her ruse of not telling Gohan about Gogeta; Gohan deserves to know about his son!

Goten and Bra are indeed a good couple under normal circumstances but Videl's bitchiness makes Gohan and Bra ideal.

I'm glad Trunks and Goten remain friends like in canon...

When will Vegeta and Bulma discover that Gohan is the father?...

Excellent chapter...
DarkVoid116 chapter 12 . 9/1/2013
Oh how I know Goten and Videl will not take kindly to this...

Chi Chi and Goku would be awesome grandparents lololol. Goku would be understanding enough to recognize a situation despite his naïveté.

Bra and Gogeta make a great mother/son bond, and Bulma and Vegeta are awesome parents.

Great chapter...
DarkVoid116 chapter 11 . 9/1/2013
I'm glad that of all the people, Bra chose to confess this secret in Goku. Goku is about as loving and caring as possible and will adore little Gogeta with all of his heart. That said, I wonder when Chi Chi, Vegeta and Bulma will discover this?

Goku is rightfully shocked...

Vita, eh? Videl has a daughter named Vita and used her to ensnare Gohan.

I hope Gohan and Bra are reunited soon enough...

Good chapter.
DarkVoid116 chapter 10 . 9/1/2013
Trunks took that better than I thought he would, honestly. I thought he'd freak.

It's a bit weird that Gohan, Trunks, Goten, and Bra never knew about their Saiyan heritage...

That said, Videl's scheming is getting absurd. She lost Gohan. Period. Done. Finished. She needs to get over her losses and accept this.

Bulma and Vegeta also took this news better than I expected, despite their apparent evident disappointment.

Good chapter.
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