|Reviews for A New Way to Play|
| The130thunit chapter 1 . 5/28
| pixelherodev chapter 8 . 3/23
Can't wait for next chap!
| zen-aku the spirit of the wolf chapter 5 . 3/20
wow taylor's personality took a huge left. that is totally not like her i really wonder where you're going with this.
| zen-aku the spirit of the wolf chapter 3 . 3/20
vigor and endurance should be switched. a person with more vigorous energy would get back up faster but a person with more endurance can go on longer.
| zen-aku the spirit of the wolf chapter 2 . 3/20
hmm i'd like to hear about dynamic tension. she was still out of character a little but it got a lot better as the chapter went on. taylor didn't think she was fooling tattletale she was hoping she was. she knew it was very likely that lisa would know. i think you should use the classifications of power once observe gets high enough because honestly the way it described their abilities was a little lackluster. maybe something like:
tinker 4 host- modular technology
| zen-aku the spirit of the wolf chapter 1 . 3/20
your system seem's a little off for a world with super powers but it's ok i guess. it doesn't really touch on various aspects. in a world where physical strength didn't matter as much i'd say leave out a strength stat but it's kinda needed here considering all the strength based powers out there and the fact wildbow touches on how the physical ability of a character means taylor should act in a certain manner almost every time she gets in a fight. likewise VIGor and ENDurance are redundant, the only real difference is that vigor can be interpreted as enthusiasm. DEX is whatever it's completely fine. WIS is whatever since game terms but it's redundant with intuition since wisdom is generally insight and the ability to make good decisions or conclusions i'd recommend making that an insight stat rather than two separate stats. INT is fine as it is. CHA doesn't necessarily need to be there but it would be a good point of character progression. as she gains more CHA for what she does she would gain a bit of a confidence boost and get a chance to see how she's beginning to grow as a person and that she's not as bad at social skills as she thinks. it would also help quantify the presence effect powers like glory girl has or help with skills like intimidate, something that if you want to stay to taylor you are going to need as she constantly uses intimidation, tricks, lies, etc to fight her enemies and relate to her teammates.
taylor was rather out of character. ive been reading worm nonstop for a while now and it didn't really capture her. i can't see taylor being ready to stand up and do something about them without some significant confidence boosts. she was too afraid to do anything about it and was very much a defeatist. she likely would have just skipped school like in canon especially since she would never disappoint her father if she could help it although she does a lot of that later and she wanted to deal with them herself eventually. she chose to stay in school despite what happened in canon and trained with her power in secret to become a hero as an escape from all of it so she instead would have continued to deal with it and just used playing with her power as an escape again or maybe picked up gaming to get a feel for the ability.
| Guestapo chapter 8 . 3/12
Hope Glory Girl gets stomped.
| Junior VB chapter 8 . 3/2
| Junior VB chapter 7 . 3/2
| SylarFan chapter 5 . 3/2
Kendra is right. Taylor's power is cool.
Uber and Leet made Taylor angry.
| Junior VB chapter 3 . 3/2
El inventario es muy útil.
Taylor aprendió Tai Chi.
The inventory is very useful.
Taylor learned Tai Chi.
| Junior VB chapter 2 . 3/2
Taylor hizo amigos nuevos.
Taylor made new friends.
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/21
This is probably one of the best gamer crossover fics I've read! You have some weird misspellings every now and then and sometimes your syntax is odd too. It's not quite an issue, say that a non-native speaker would have, as opposed to someone who just wasn't proofreading very well would make. This very quickly is going to have the potential for Taylor to be ridiculously OP'd, maybe to the point that any conflict will be negligible and trite, except against Scion, which is ultimately your goal. I think you should add humor to the category if it's possible to have more than two. It's very amusing. Some of the humor though, especially through Kendra, is a little bit too much like the humor in a lot of anime and manga, which isn't really to my taste, but that's just me being picky. Overall, really good story and I can't wait for more chapters hopefully soon!
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/10
| EternalVoidinsilence chapter 8 . 2/3
Brilliant story got completely hooked on can't wait for the next chapter