|Reviews for Contact of Races|
| DomR1997 chapter 15 . 7/19
Slight historical mistake I noticed. De Gaulle didn't actually "liberate" Paris. Rather, he threatened to whip up the French resistance fighters into a frenzy which would've gotten almost all of them killed. When that didn't convince the allies, he threw a temper tantrum that ended in insubordination. He decided to take Paris on his own with no support, which would've ended horribly for him. The Americans and British saved his awful attempt, and in return he turned up his nose at them. He's only remembered as a liberator because he was a politically savvy person and the rest of the allied command helped prop up his claims to prevent communists from gaining traction in France. So basically, a combination of pettiness and incompetence is what made him into the historical figure he is today.
| BClassDemon chapter 13 . 7/8
Can't help but wonder what happened to the Destiny's A.I
| BClassDemon chapter 10 . 7/8
Poor Kara... didn't watch much of the show but what I did see of her made her a fav...
| Gigi Duru chapter 12 . 5/29
Just a small information for you to ponder upon: 20% of habitable worlds in this galaxy would amount to around 15 million ones, not a few hundred thousands - and according to the latest astronomical studies that's the conservative estimate, an optimistic estimate put it at 22.
And please check your spelling, it's getting ridiculous.
| Bolondka chapter 7 . 5/24
Hey I love your stories even though the typos are horrible :) I know it's science fiction but simple law of physics (about momentum) would dictate that if their ship especially with no gravity would suddenly stop then would be flung backwards all the personnel on the ship would be a very thin coating of organic material on the walls. Just for future reference :)
Anyway, keep up the good work.
| tpx1 chapter 25 . 5/8
great sequel to the first one. thank you for sharing!
| AnimeA55Kicker chapter 7 . 4/24
Got to say. I think a war between the Colonies and the Race would have been interesting as it’s own stand alone fic. Those would be some interesting battles just because they are closer technology wise, though I give the advantage to the Colonies.
| Guest chapter 25 . 4/21
Wilkins wrote : "Well this is the End of Contact of Race's coming in about 3 weeks currently aiming for the weekend of the 20thof April 2018 will be the next story Contact at the Citadel. (I changed the name). I am taking this long as a sort of break and to give me time to get ahead in the story. I want to make some things clear, first I plan to set the story around Mass Effect 2 beginning of 3. There is no Earth or humans in the Mass Effect Galaxy until the Tau'ri arrive.
So until then, thanks Wilkins75."
Looking forward for your next story on April 2018 as announced - Contact at the Citadel.
Still a lot of remaining topics from previous two stories like the author versions for :
- 12 colonies of Kobol history with Cylon
- ZPM element zero mining
- SG diversions from canon events
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Most importantly, is Valhalla truly Kobol and who is Kobol in the author story version ?
Uncleared . . . . .
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Hoping that the author will kindly shed light on those chiffhanging ?
| SlickRCBD chapter 22 . 4/11
I am hardly a grammar Nazi, nor am I particularly good at finding typos, but a couple things were glaring enough that they seemed to jump out at me. Perhaps you'd like to proof read this chapter again? Here are a few errors I found:
Unaware that the forces of the Tau'ri where already on the move Emperor Risson waited in the Imperial communication center. The workers and technicians who normally didn't have a chance to see the Emperor from a distance yet alone so close. None of the technicians dared to approach the Emperor, they could tell from his body stance from his arms where crossed over his golden body paint and how his toe claws clicked on the floor told everyone he was not in a good mode. If that wasn't enough he kept one eye turret on the wall mounted clock.
"good mode"? Perhaps you mean mood?
"I expect your letter of resignation by sun down." stated Risson as the Protocol Master looked at him. "If you don't I will order you stripped of all rank and expelled palace and from the Race."
The last sentence does not make sense.
"Once the refueling process was done the strike force entered hyperspace with the expectation of the Hadrian class transports, the Galahad class destroyers and the refueling Pelicans."
Expectation? Do you mean exception?
| Artarais1991 chapter 13 . 4/11
Ah why not build a super gate in the Pegasus galaxy or in the Argard Galaxy
| Guest chapter 25 . 4/11
I hope they do not decide to trade advanced technologies with the Council races. They need Eezo for ZPM, but they can simply claim a solar Sisitema rich in Eezo and undermine it by themselves ...
| Eaglestorm27 chapter 25 . 4/10
Hmm I'm wonder how the Reaper ships could destroy a Tau'ri ship . I mean if we take account that the Stargate ship ,even the Ha'tak class of first generation could take gigatons ;How some species who could throw only kilotons level of energy against that Shield which could be possibly more powerful when the ZPM will come . I'm wonder if the Tau'ri could transform Jupiter into a small star (a red dwarf star ) in the far future . The Aschen was proven to be able to transform Jupiter into a star into a few hundred centuries . If the tau'ri will do it , it will accelerate their biological evolutions and could even give more temperature for the other planet like Mars . Also try to create some new weapons anticapital ship for the tau'ri like better nuclear missile or even particle pulse or plasma pulse weapons and upgrade the plasma beam weapons and please try to make the tau'ri create and developp their own technology and science . Maybe you could also create some fleet of exploration using a gew generation of technology behind the actual technology that the tau'ri have who will explore galaxies without stargate because it'certainly sure there are something and maybe some civilisation .
| Vaunted chapter 25 . 4/10
Looking forward to your next story, Wilkins! Keep up the good work. Having dyslexia myself, I’m very impressed with how you’ve overcome this obstacle in your path and press forward regardless.
| EvilTheLast chapter 25 . 4/8
Good update...well...the story is actually finished. I hope the new 4 'client races' get along fine with their new Tau'ri 'masters'. (They are being protected by the Tau'ri and learning from them.) Well, the 3 lizard races will have a hard time 'computing' that they are not the 'top dog' in the galaxy. According to the books I read, I believe there could be a bunch of Race children left behind because they randomly ran off into the woods. Race females laid their eggs in the 'best spot'...and that could be anywhere. I have hopes for Emperor Risson. Well...poor Justinian. Well, I was hoping 'first contact' would be pirates/slaves or something like that in nature. I'm not a fan of Reapers stories.
| The queen of atlantis chapter 1 . 4/6
Hi there, thought I should finally leave a review for this story / story arc. First of all can I say what an amazing job U have done. Definitely in the top 5 best Stargate fanfics out there for me and ur ability to write, advance and develop the story is top notch. Defiantly worth the read and the wait for more chapters. This is the only fanfic I check daily for updates. I’ve read this from the first arc ( bsg) and that too was just brilliant Can’t wait for the next arc. Keep up the amazing work xxx always excited for more xxx