amazing fanfic, again one of the best

Bruh, if you’ve read or did research. What’s your deal trying to give the Tau’ri (god it’s a ridiculous name), the proverbial big gun. You make them out as the most power hungry faction as well.

The battlestar galactic had railguns, this was a mature technology that the colonials possessed. I don’t know why authors keep forgetting this.

If I remember correctly the Race uses fusion power and propulsion

I couldn't seem to post ththe Harry Turtledove series books . _

You should consider extending the story with with the Harry Turtledove Colonization series ( en. wiki/Colonization_(series). pd/Homeward-Bound-Audiobook/B004SIL1U8) that is a sequel to the Harry Turtledove World War series that you already use. And you might want to consider that Harry Turtledove quite often regularly incorporates character indepth detailed gradual aging process characters descriptions from page to page chapter to chapter book to book within particular book series that he has written. Finally it would be interesting if it would be interesting if Stargate media Franchise, mass affect media Franchise, DC comics media Franchise, Marvel comics media Franchise, Doctor Who media Franchise and Star Trek media Franchise content could be individually incorporated into the alternative history (from the various mentioned harry turtledove book sereies storyline set time period(in past, present, to future) all the way to timelines distant future of the various different mentioned other media Franchise timeline possibly distant future time periods. harry-turtledove/ . _ harry-turtledove/ wiki/Category:Stand-alone_Books

Oof. Too bad Justin. She fell for the guy that put a boot to her back and all but went Unga-bunga-caveman on her.

The Race are somewhat more hightech than 70 - 80s, It's more like late 90s gulf war era wise but a lot more polished with things like the tanks using efficient hydrogen fuel cells, Their Jets are quite capable of reaching space from ground and vice versa and huge spacecraft that can make planetary landings.

You seem to be doing the same thing as you did to the Colonials making them more primitive and lowtech than canon.

The Race are just a bunch of Karen's aren't they

I'm restarting reading this because I love it. Forget GoT, we need plasma cannons and energy shields!

I truly love the series but find the Robert and Acacia parts, somewhat pointless? They add nothing to the plot or world building. Unlike Kara and lee and the rest of the Coloniels finding their feet and part in the new world they seem superfluous.

What kind of retard would fight on the ground when they controlled the orbitals? You just hit them with rods from god until the enemy gives up or until they are all dead.

What a retarded BullShit. Massive Tauri ships LOL
You dumbass, Race ships are slower than light ships with huge cargo capacity with big reaction fuel tanks and they use "braking rockets" to stop... AKA Race Ships are Massive, not Tauri...

one more correction. you use guild where you should be using guide

So... another set of words you tend to use incorrectlyEntree" is the main course of a meal. You use that or "Entrees" when you should be using "Entry, Entries, or "Entrance". "Severed" means cut or broken; you have used this one in the place of "Served" as in 'Dinner was served at 8' or 'John served in the military'. I only mentioned these because they are consistent mistakes. I understand that with dyslexia it is very easy to get the spelling mixed up. I am hoping that these being pointed out to you will help you improve. I love your stories and I hope you continue to write. Please do not let my critiques discourage you. I wouldn't be trying to give advice if I didn't think you were capable of improving. Keep up the good work.