Reviews for Wedding Woes
vixangel chapter 14 . 1/22/2009
Hey, erm, well I've never submitted a bad review or nasty comment about anyone before but this has bugging me throughout reading your stories. Perhaps the reason people didn't review is 'coz you're kinda rude. Demanding people review isn't going to encourage them to do so, you need to make a connection with your readers and with the chapters, instead it seems like you try to hard with cliff hangers etc. And, calling yourself a terrific write is pretty arrogant. Your stories have potential but I'm sorry to say, I've read much much better. You don't seem to have a full grasp on your characters personalities and make them stick to it. I understand it is an AU but some of their behaviour is just so unlike them it almost makes me cringe. Like how all cutesy proud dad obsessed Angel was with Skyler and how he acted after she had died and disregarded Conner. I really don't mean to be rude, I just think you can't talk to your readers like that because it really won't make them want to review. As I said I think your story has potential, I too HATE the whole Cordy/Angel storyline, I mean Hello! Seriously I swear it made me sick just to watch it, Joss Whedon and co completely changed the characters n a bad way. It's like hello! Angel, doesnt forget Buffy for a hundred years in hell but give him 3 in LA and he's over her? pfft lol. Anyway I know you wrote this story a fair few years ago but I hope you still pay a visit to Buffyworld every now and again, there are a few truly awful fics out there lol but there are some really talented authors about at the mo too. Im writing my very first fic at the mo and another author 'angels blue eyed girl' is well worth a look. Anyway I hope all is well with you x
David Fishwick chapter 16 . 1/16/2009
Great story and thanks for writing.
hinnyxx chapter 16 . 4/20/2004 is gone...happyhappy...write more soon! and lemme see...things i'd like to mention...editing could use some work...and work on your angelus parts...he's a bit more and... he's meaner...yea...just maybe watch some old ep. with him in them and then maybe try again...but other wise...great story! i'm pissed at every one who does the whole sad ending when angel and buffy can't get back together...and i'm pissed at the people who put buffy with someone else or angel with someone else...sry it just makes me mad!
huffybuffy chapter 16 . 8/9/2003
grea third story. you have to write a fourth installment of the skylar storyline. please?
cloudofcalm chapter 16 . 6/18/2003

Schmaltz is back. Oh dear. I had such hopes for this, as well.

cloudofcalm chapter 15 . 6/18/2003
Right. Saw that plot a mile ago. It still sucks.

'Restorer's powers are profound'. Sorry sweetie, I ain't buying. You needed to establish something waay back, that did not make it this easy. Buffy and Angel immortal, huh? Fun. They get to watch everyone die. Angel was all about wanting to be able to grow old and die. Poor guy.

cloudofcalm chapter 14 . 6/18/2003
Oh God...interesting turn of events. Demanding reviews.

Don't do it.

This is coming from the same author who said, 'I was gonna jump out my apartment window'. Who now states, 'I know I'm a good author'.

So people didn't review. Such is life. Write a more interesting chapter.

cloudofcalm chapter 12 . 6/18/2003
'Otherwise known as Daddy'. I adored that line.

Kudos on Angelus, the 'bull crap' stuff is getting old though. Either, 'bull', which Buffy wouldn't say, or 'bull shit'. It's never been bull crap.

cloudofcalm chapter 11 . 6/18/2003
Okay, I was impressed with this up till now. It was better than most of this greeting-card-esque style sweetness that you had going.

But don,t whatever you do, use Charmed's spells. Use something like it, use the damn thing, just don't talk about it like a TV show. it doesn't fit.

cloudofcalm chapter 4 . 5/28/2003
lmao. i *like* Veronica. So many things about her i like...telling Angel black is passe merits a mention. And yeah, kinda saw Angel/Angelus return coming. He was *so* happy. sigh. such is life in Joss Whedon's soap opera
cloudofcalm chapter 2 . 5/28/2003
ooh, interesting...I like the interaction. I'm interested to see how you've handled a seven year old, it's different. I'm liking the Skylar/Kevin interaction, and I lol to see Skylar use her power to restore her chocolate pudding
ScissorsForHands chapter 7 . 4/24/2003
Aw,Spike is so sweet to Skylar!
ScissorsForHands chapter 5 . 4/24/2003
OH no! Angelus is back!
Jamie chapter 16 . 3/15/2003
Hey! I loved this story! I can't wait until the next Skylar fan fic comes up!
gidgetgirl chapter 16 . 3/15/2003
the nickname bit was cute, though I would have liked to have seen Chad and Veronica in this final chapter. The fluffiness was a bit much for me... something about "I love you," said so and so and "I love you too" said so and so number two doesn't really say passion to me. How loud were their voices, what angles were their heads at when they said it? Did Buffy whisper it into his shirt or say it steadily into his eyes? Is his heart beating? The thing you need to remember is that you're writing the love scene for Buffy and Angel as characters, not for the B/A shippers who beg you for it. Give the sweet details, otherwise it falls a bit flat. And why do you make it sound like Angel's not a vamp anymore? Our Angel needs his Achilles heel with the sunlight thing and the blood thing opens windows for some great Kool Aid jokes. If Angel isn't a vampire, it ruins the vamp/slayer thing for me. Let's see... good job with the plot twist of Richard, but I expect to see a good back story of how he came to be working for this demon. Is he by any chance a Wolfram and Hart kiddo?
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