Reviews for Falling In Reverse |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing. :D Absolutely love it. It's unlike any other fanfiction I've read! I've read TONS, a least a few hundered Naruto fanfictions. Your story is truely unique, no one else has written anything closely resembling what you wrote. I can't wait to see what will be in the next chapters... Good work, please don't abandon it. :) |
![]() ![]() Was looking for a time-traveling kind of universe and I found this. I've got just a few things to point out. First, I like how you're writing Minato here. A battered man, jaded, scarred, and exhausted. The way it should be, with how the world is shaping up in this story. Most story had Minato as a sweet and kind person -nothing wrong with that, because he IS a warm and kind character- but it's nice to see the potential of him actually getting worn-out by war and became a harder man in the process. In my opinion, he is the best-written character simply because he struggles with his weaknesses, his hesitations, and his failures while trying to keep it all under control for the sake of his people. With that said, I have a little critique, if you don't mind. Naruto and Kurama. I know you've created a world where Naruto only had Kurama to attach to, and they're thrown into an unexpected situation. However, Naruto struck me as a character who'd rise above challenges no matter what kind of adversity, and we've seen how much he'd matured in the War Arc. Remember when edo-Minato said he wanted to talk to Naruto in the middle of the battle? Naruto didn't stop to listen, he simply put matters at hand as priority above his own emotions and problems. He's got a big heart, and he can handle things himself as he has been for 17 years. Needless to say, I doubt he'll be cowering under Kurama's protective wings (tails?) every time he's threatened emotionally or having an existential crisis. Kurama is Naruto's friend, not his babysitter. I'd advice to use this friendship sparingly and wisely. Anyway, I see good potentials here. Keep going, and I wish you the best in future chapters. |
![]() ![]() Oh yes please. - A very excited Bin |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh man, I cannot wait for the next update! This is so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoy this chapter, hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely fascinating. You have a real gift for spinning the emotions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My favorite chapter of this fanfiction so far is chapter 5, then 1 and 7 tied as second. I re read this fanfic when no one updates the fanfics i'm reading, and it never gets old, i love it so much xd |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice FanFic so far, if I were Naruto I would ask for an entire rundown of the history of this world |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is absolutely amazing! Exactly what I wanted to read. Can't wait for the next chapter ;-; |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope naruto gives obito a chance️ and awwww protective kurama is the bestest!️️️ I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.M.G. Kakashi I love you ;v; He was right, no way can he be a lousy sensei, he's the best, i wuv him ;v; HAHAHAHA Naruto freaking out about Sasuke being a girl! AND KAKASHI MAKING IT WORSE! Omg I love them together, their interactions warm my heart aaaaaah 'I'm not some circus animal for this trash to spectate', excuse-me, how to you always write lines as funny and stylish, each time Kurama talks I'm rolling of laughter hahaha! And it *ended* me that Naruto had to take a moment to see how to rephrase it xD Oh no, now I'm angry D: Again with people being trash to jinchurikis? For the love of god Naru, don't be so patient with them, omg my blood pressure just rose all of a sudden. MAYBE YOU COULD START BY SAYING 'O THANK YOU STRANGER FOR SAVING US' HUH? URGH I'm annoyed. I second Kurama. Gaara I love you TT OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG 'I'd rather be dead with them, then alive with you all' MY HEART D: That line is way too strong! I can't, wow, and poor Minato ;-; Poor Naruto ;-; Can they all get hugs please ;-; AAAAAAAAAAAAAH KURAMA I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU Yeah it would seem like I love a lot of people in this story I swear your characterisation is just *chef's kiss* I love how Gaara is still Gaara, I can almost hear her in her soft and steady voice, she's such a breath of fresh air ;v; Oooops, ngl, when Mikoto touched Naruto and he stared at her with a blank expression, I thought he was freaking out because he thought there was a female Sasuke in front of him and that Kakashi had somehow lied to him xD Mikoto's so sweeet and genuine though, I love her ;v; (I know i know I'm repeating myself, there's nothing else I can say) And I love than she's the clan head! OMG, when Mikoto told him that no matter what he was Naruto, I'm *so* glad she did, but at the same time, POOR NARU STILL THINKS THAT MINATO DOESNT WANT HIM? URGGHHH Minato PLEASE start talking I can't take this T-T Oh, sweet, Minato has exactly the same internal crisis as Naruto, huh. Why you doing that, I'm going to cry for real now ಥ_ಥ The end turned dark pretty quickly, you're wrecking me xD Wow, didn't expect the story to turn out this way. The concept is sooooo interesting though, and, as my precedent reactions suggest, I just L.O.V.E. your characters! Thank you for sharing this story, I had an awesome time reading it |
![]() ![]() ![]() huh? What was that? (ㆆ_ㆆ) ... ONE EYED UCHIHA? SHISUI? WHY? OMG where's Danzo I'm going to THROTTLE HIM! (‵′)︵ Also, Shisui-darling called Kurama "Kurama" *cries* I love him your honor ;v; Poor Naruto, his mental state really hurts. I definitely get the resentment he feels for Rin, but I'm glad to see that she found a way to reach him! Also, Kakashi 'ditching his team each time he might get attached' to them is a golden line omg xD The way Naruto describes Sasuke hahahaha obviously it couldn't start with a compliment, now I can't wait to see the counterpart that can be kind of a bastard too! Okay, I really DIDN'T expect Gaara to be a girl! And Naruto's reaction was magical hahahaha! 'Go away, image, go away!' I'm so surprised by the fact that Suna was completely destroyed during the 3rd war! Now I really wonder what political changes there are ôvô |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT WAS THAT OMG (﹏) My poor Naruto T-T Also, Obito, aouch! *This* Obito doesn't deserve it, I can't imagine the horror he felt at Kurama's revelations! AND MINATO WHO HAD TO CHOOSE BETWEEN HIS STUDENT AND THE SON THAT HE JUST FOUND AGAIN OMGGGGGGGGGG I'm not going to survive this story I'm afraid I probably shouldn't have laughed but, ngl, when Kurama mentioned the Uchiha Massacre so casually, I, I, I did. I'm usually angry and horrified by it, but I don't know, the way he told them about how there was an Uchiha Massacre in his dimension ended me xD The image of Kushina dead with her dead son in her arms is awful omg, and Minato... Now I'm *really* scared to reach chapter 7, what should I do ಥ_ಥ Btw, I'll take it that either Naruto or Kushina was Kurama's jinchuriki? Minato had wondered earlier if Naruto would have befriended his Kyubi too had he lived. Does it mean that he was extracted and is really part of the Gedo Mazo now? *curls in bed* I'm not liking what I'm discovering, I'm really too scared D: Oh, and btw, I just realized, the fact that Kakashi said "they were used to being betrayed", was it actually Zetsu all along who made them think so? ARE THERE ANY GOOD NEWS PLEASE? Yes, yes there are, Shisui is alive, that's all I need, sorry for the accusation And ohhhh, the fact that Kurama is so teasing with Minato and Kakashi, could it be that deep down he's also fond of them? ;v; He IS more familiar with their counterparts after all. Only, Naruto comes first. Omg. My heart. "Naruto's not okay. Minato's not okay. Obito's not okay." Naruto, Minato and Obito are my middle names. Yeah, Me. I'm not okay. Also, what do you mean you suck at writing Obito? Gosh, what nonsense is that? D: I never liked Obito as much as I did here, and I'm the type to dislike OOC characters so it's not even because he's nice and fun, his personality just makes *so much sense* and he's very easy to appreciate! I reaaaally hope he can develop a good relationship with Naruto in the future |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely LOVE the way you write Obito! Ngl I'm not a big fan of the character (and that is an ephemism), but in this alternate dimension, you made his grown-up self feel so natural and close to good!obito, while managing to also make him sound and act older, I just love it! The interactions between him and Kurama were golden, especially that 'You're definitely sulking' hahahahhaa! I can see why he's compared to Naruto so often, I'd love them to have a nice relationship (on the long run, though, Naruto would need a lot of time) Your characterisations in general are crazy good anyway, despite it being in AU, I can really see all of them behaving that way, it makes the story so alive! Especially Minato and his quick-thinking and still being too scared to hope, omg ;v; And I. LOVE. how you write Naruto's relationship with Kurama (ʃƪ) Also, SHISUIIIIIIIIIIIII AHHHHHHH |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'The person they were honored to call a friend'? D: Omg, who betrayed them? GAI? You're scaring meeee! It can't be Obito right? He can't be bad in this word too c'mon? Oh, Zetsu, obviously, what did I expect. You had me freaked out for a sec ngl. I'm so glad for Naruto 'bonding' with Kakashi, even if it was quick ;v; The quick flashback of chibi Naruto showing the shadow clone jutsu to his dad (and failing at it, apparently haha) was sooo touching, I can feel Minato's fondness and pain omg, this is going to be a hard read, isn't it? *cries in a corner* And OMG THE APPEARANCE OF KURAMA AT THE END! *nice guy thumbs up* YOU GO, FLUFFY FURRBALL |