|Reviews for Paul Owen McQueen|
| a lia chapter 1 . 7/15/2017
A father without subtitle
| one speedy boi chapter 2 . 6/29/2017
Watch the Cadillac be Storm all along. Wait.. if not, YOU SHOULD DO IT! You could really take in the dough with that m8!
| Lel chapter 2 . 6/25/2017
Just this?! :( waiting for more
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2017
Sally & Lightning should be having a story makes him look kind of bad.
| FionaTheWitch chapter 1 . 6/24/2017
It's off to a great start! I can't wait to see where this goes!
| Sam chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
I luv the plot. For the next chapter u should introduce Paul to Cruz, and explain his whole story. But anyway I luv ur story and keep up the awesome work. I hope u post a new chapter soon. Please update soon.
| Netbug009 chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
It's nice to see some cute fanfic about Cruz! But your grammar needs some work. There's a lot of run on sentences.