"somebodies chop shop" *Somebody's.* It is, after all, a possessive. Somebody owns that chop shop, this it is somebody's.

Also, why did you have Wrex comment on the "awkward human gesture for yes" when, in this chapter, you had a Turian nod? If a Turian merc working for Aria knows what a nod is, Wrex probably should too.

Also, you had your Elcor Shadow Broker say "ms." Ms. is ALWAYS capitalized. Every variant of the Mr./Ms./Mrs. is capitalized. No exceptions.

"hangar" Yeah, humans are more distinctive than those hangars. Places where we store airplanes are much less unique than individual humans.

Might want to make that actually say "Hanar."

Why the Uber-Jellies? They shouldn't be able to take anything from the Council. Because, you know, the resources of the Council races are vast and the Hanar only have the Drell and their own tentacles. Compared to the Turian war fleets, Asari advancement because of their Prothean Beacon, and Salarian technical expertise, there is very little chance that the Big Stupid Jellfish species could fight all of that.

Misspelt? Is that, like, the hide of an animal? Is Wrex going to eat one?

I kid.

But seriously, misspelling misspelled is either maximum trolling or you're from the Deep South and didn't notice anything wrong.

Uzbek, huh? You don't often hear about them. Nice country to use for the General Secretary of the UN.

I'm not entirely sure the math checks out for the crash landing (other works use titanium rods dropped from orbit as makeshift nukes "but with none of the radioactive fallout!" I imagine a spaceship that was thrown out of a Relay would be traveling significantly faster than said metal rods. It would then likely obliterate cities and liquefy the spaceship and anyone inside). I also don't care that much.

Wrex survived something impossible because he is Krogan. Fair enough.

You made more than few mistakes early on. "Likly" was only one of several typos I caught (I noted some of the others, but I forgot most of them by the time I reached the review button).

Good start though.

Great story

Amazing story
what about shepard?

Paid
payed does not exist

good story so far
please continue!

This is good, I wonder what other changes have happened and how this humanity will be different from normal

Interesting

Did find this story today and I ca say it have potential to be great

Keep the chapters coming

Best shadow broker ever! Love this story so far it is a very interesting read.

Wonderful story. It is beautiful and realistic in the same time. Sci-fi yet still has enough mundane features to stand on, grim yet still bright and hopeful. Rooting for your next update.

I love this Shadow Broker. Can we keep him please?

And the STG Chief is an AI? I'm shock and pushed to my wits end here.

What is this blasphemy? Earth governments have a quick and fast react to alien presence? At least you bring Wrex to Australia, he'll fit right in.