You certainly understand how people think, i like it.
Even the goblins are a little racist and xenophobic, very realistic.

Hope you both are doing well and that some day this gets an update.

Still confused about age because another chapter again said Harry is in his twenties? I mean, there's been a few other inconsistencies, but this one keeps popping up repeatedly. So, how old is Harry and how old is Lily?

Also, why isn't Danny Phantom tagged or marked in the description of this fic? At this point in time (June 2024), it is clearly marked as only a Harry Potter/Marvel Crossover. The Final Fantasy stuff is understandable not being tagged, as it's a few lines only in a couple of chapters.

And authors can write whatever they want, obviously, but readers should also be given the informed option not to read those same things- and I definitely wouldn't have gotten into this fic if it was marked properly and I knew a good chunk of chapters (at least four I think, maybe three?) were about a Fandom I'm not familiar with as it makes understanding the story difficult. I specifically tailored search results to include only HP and MCU, so losing a fic I spent so much time reading to a Fandom I'm not familiar with for multiple chapters is a disappointment and in my case (I have mild OCD amongst other things) something my brain can't help but perseverate on.

So keep writing what you want, but please be respectful of your readers' time and mark/tag properly.

So, what's the actual timeline? Because Lilu was referred to as a toddler/one year old one chapter, and a four year old the next and now Harry is eighteen...which means if she was four, she'd have been born almost two years before her parents got married?

Im gonna go out on a limb here and guess your not on fanfiction anymore seein as its been 3 years since you last published ANYTHING

when next :(

This author has a lot of ideas. The problem is he is unwilling to spend 20 seconds to consider if his idea is good or not and just writes it. Because of that, this story has some good ideas but also a mountain load of senseless bullshit. It is full of plotholes and the MC is doing stupid things left and right.

For example, in the first omake in this chapter, he decided to pay Black Cat 40k dollars. Why? Just cuz. So she won't steal. Dunno. Wasn't really specified. But hey! He now has Black Cat working for him! Cool, no?

Well... no. The author at least could come with a proper reason to hire her.

Also, there are logical holes all over this fic. Like Darcy is supposed to be Loki's daughter. But anybody who pays attention and has a passable skill in ELEMENTARY MATH can figure out that it is impossible according to the timeline the author set. Loki would have been doing his punishment and living as James Potter, not even remembering he was Loki, during the time Darcy was conceived. Apparently, this author's math skills do not go beyond kindergarten level. (I think he just didn't think about it, tbh. Like, at all. He just wrote it cuz it sounded cool.)

What authors need to learn is that not every idea that sounds cool in their head is actually good or cool when put on paper. It is sad. Because the premise of this story is great. But all the BS in it is simply ruining it.

I was seriously missing this, decided to reread it, took some time to find it again, and then reread it. And now, even though I doubt that you'll ever return to writing, I do so wish you would. Well, thanks for writing what you did of it, and bye for now.

Will you return?

I have been waiting for the next chapter of this story! I would love if this story were to continue!

why does every writer write out every single thing they eat for breakfast it's dumb and too long to read

since it's been so long since you've updated this story or even your own profile I can only assume that you are no longer on fanfiction, while I would have liked to see how you finished this story, I can understand that with your PC breaking it might have been more than a little annoying to try rewrite your unpublished chapters

Well I hate to say this but Have you thought about starting the story from the beginning again revising it since you have more characters as well as a better story line going I mean I personally a good idea but I love this story that I've been reading for a while now Because it does take you a bit of time to get a new stories or chapters I should say but that's neither here this is your story I'm just a reader Thank you for writing please right

This Chapter just made laught so hard

Looking forward to when your next able to update please.