Reviews for Reborn Dragon Rebirth
xaxiel1572 chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
Didn't seem that different from the first chapter except Natsu being less confrontational with Zeref at least.
Huntermolder chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
And I eagerly await the next installment of your wonderful story.
Nyx the Author chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
I was thinking, what if Ingeel was Great Red, and Mavis was Ophis? Eh? Eh? Just thinking that would be interesting. Looking forward to the rewrite!
Sanguinis13 chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
The quality of your writing seems better than the first version, from what I recall anyway, though I can't say whether the story itself is better or worse just yet.

Also, didn't Igneel improve, change, or do something to Natsu's fire last time, or am I just thinking of a different story? I don't dislike Igneel's gift in this version, and believe it will serve him very well actually, but if I am not remembering incorrectly, why not give him both? Mavis and Zeref could be argued to have given him multiple very valuable gifts each if you count each magic as a gift.

Anyway, interesting start, or restart I suppose, and I hope to see more soon.
TheBurrningAngel chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
Definitely better,
I like how you waited for the actual manga to come out so you could continue from there.
Although I do hope you don't change the relationship Nastu and Ozpin have.
AmbrosiusKurogane chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
I have to say better though I still liked your flames of emotions thing.
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