|Reviews for A World Without|
| PleiadesWolfe chapter 4 . 5/18/2008
I hope everything goes okay for them. How far along is Lily now?
| PleiadesWolfe chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
lol. This is great! I love it.
| immovinout chapter 8 . 3/5/2008
I LOVED that! So awesome! :)
| karupin sama chapter 7 . 3/2/2008
thought ron's eyes were blue..
| macaday me a nut chapter 8 . 2/11/2008
*sigh*...Im so happy. That ending was perfect. So very cute. I loved this so very much.
Macaday me a nut (and your one too!)
| Becky chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
I wish I got that kind of welcome when I moved!
| FrankieGurl chapter 8 . 9/1/2007
OMG i loe this story! so cute!
Have u ritten eny more Harry x Draco stories?
I LOVE THIS STORY!
| shoobox chapter 4 . 8/19/2007
so weird my school is taking on Oklahoma also this year...
not me personally but...
love this storie!
| Harry Snape-Potter chapter 8 . 8/8/2007
I have to say that it was a good story, the only problem is that it sounds too American, and saying that I am an American I know what I'm talking about, at lease you could have made it sound more English after reading some of the reviews you got in pervious chapters, and if you weren't you could have just said it took place in American and not England...
| Karen chapter 4 . 5/29/2007
I am American; forgive my ignorance, but do the english have teams like this? Do they talk that way? It doesn't sound very British.
Until George Washington was president our ancestors probably followed very closely the manners mores and speach of the English.
If Jane Eyre and other Ebglish authors are too unamerican to use as guides I am sure there are early 'American' Authors who left England with some memories of how things were done in their homeland.
| Lexie Lupin chapter 8 . 5/23/2007
| audaces fortuna iuvat chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
Okay, this chapter was cute, I'll give you that much, but you should either change it to an America!fic or get a British beta because there are so many culture specific details which are wrong wrong wrong for Britain.
And, I'd definitely change the sport to either football (european football, not american football) or rugby, because NO ONE plays basketball in Britain. It isnt a proper sport over there.
But yeh... gosh, i've just realised this is coming across as a flame... :/ IT ISNT MEANT TO BE.
Just constructive criticism which would make this more believable. It's all in the details, you know...
| AccountKillerkillerkillerkille chapter 8 . 4/30/2007
whe too cute,
whats weird is I almost cryed when I heard toms story, I got more emotional and cared more than when it happen to harry, why is that?
well, good luck :] might check out that clip one changing slut story out if its completed,
more smut in future~!
| AccountKillerkillerkillerkille chapter 4 . 4/30/2007
WHAT? no details?
| f chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
A "picture perfect town" up North? Christ, can I come? Hahah. Guess not many people do real Geography anymore. :)