Reviews for A World Without
tr1st3n chapter 8 . 5/4/2004
this story was so good! oh my gosh i absolutely reveled in you writing style. keep up the good work. i'm about to start you story with the possession. loved the story.
de ann
Califaction chapter 8 . 3/30/2004
Aw, this was really cute! I loved it! H/D forever and all that! Making Harry a basketball player was cool, and your style of writing is to be admired! You gave Harry and Draco mostly ordinary, every-day life problems to deal with, excepting Tom, and I liked it.
oli chapter 8 . 3/27/2004
lol...i was laughing through the whole story,its not that your story was bad. it's just that i was on a sugar high today and was completely ending, but i liked it when narcissa and lucius were still married...dont really care about the hp/dm slash, i was only interested in the narcissa and lucius i was dissappointed that they got divorced ..anywho all in all this story gets a rating of 10/10. and i'm a big malfoy sympathizer...bugger..i need to get this sugar out of my system, i swear i make all kind of typos, and if you can read it and understand it, then that's way beyond cool!cheers!
Perona chapter 1 . 3/25/2004
Hey, I've read your story before and thought it was bloody brilliant. But I'm posting because another author (french vanilla I think it is) is posting your exact story on her profile. So this is just a note from a concerned fan altering you to problem. I just don't think it's right for her to take any credit for your beautiful story.
Nananabooboo chapter 2 . 3/20/2004
Neat, and a pretty story. I think that that scar stroy is a bit strange. Is it just that, or is something more about that scar?
How come that all "they are just normal kids in a normal high school" fics are slash? I've never read one with a straight Harry. Not that that's bad...
MagicalThinking chapter 8 . 2/22/2004
I absolutly loved this story. It was brilliant. I loved the plot line and you wrote it so well. This is perhaps one of the best D/H stories I've read on the net. I'm disapointed there won't be a sequel, but I don't know how you could expand on the story, so perhaps its for the best. But it was brilliant!
littlericepot chapter 8 . 1/5/2004
You know.. this has got to be the BEST story I have EVER read. period. end of disscussion.
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This is bloody brilliat! -adds onto favs-
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yuppers!
great job! Fabulous!
~Sweet Sorrow
serenity chair chapter 8 . 1/1/2004
your story was very good. i like the fact that there arn't all these huge fights and disasters like in most of the other stories i've read.
about wich fic to write, i personally like the 2nd. my reasons because i love harry being innocent, and cute you know generally sweet, but my other favoutite fanfiction is rurouni kenshin
where he's an assasian so you mix harry being innocent and dealy you get my favoutite charactor. i also like if when harry's more the ...you know...womwn in a relashonship.
anyway keep writing and if you were to do the first suggestion i would make the baby grow up away from civilization with hp/dm until it meets another of it's kind ..or whaterver
keep writing!
Frizzball
AJYablo chapter 8 . 12/27/2003
good...
ur storys end in a straight stop... ppl r asking for more... but theres no more it just ends... i like it kid!
AJYablo chapter 7 . 12/27/2003
kool...
*yawn*
all day reading this makes me sleepy...
AJYablo chapter 6 . 12/27/2003
kol!
Im horribly out of things to say...
well...
the story is rather long... and its good!
AJYablo chapter 5 . 12/27/2003
OMG!
so is it the potters baby crap green car that hit them eh?
Good story!
Lucius is an ass!
AJYablo chapter 4 . 12/27/2003
man im the worst reveiwer ever...
example:
*insert very good reveiw here*
thats my reveiw...
I told you i hav the crapiest reveiws ever...
good chapter dude!
AJYablo chapter 3 . 12/27/2003
yay!
Ur storys are awsum...
tho long... but i was reading one and i only got thru the first quarter of the first chapter in an hour...so...
KEEP IT UP!
AJYablo chapter 2 . 12/26/2003
New guimess record: i fell asleep about 7 times so far in ur story...
So its a good story i hope i see this kinda writing in "the making of a slut" although i would rather fancy a sequa; to "the changing of a slut"...
-aj
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