Reviews for The Enticement
Erin chapter 1 . 7/29
Random note: Blue Mountain Lake is great. I'm staying there right now! Have you ever actually been? It's a lovely, tiny little town.
Zatara1324 chapter 16 . 6/10
What a lovely story! I liked the direction you took it in; Sarah was the one who had to work for Jareth's affection instead of the opposite, which was refreshing. Also, loved the realism. They seemed a lot more like normal people than I'm used to, and that was great too! Arguing without too much arguing. Ahh (: Thanks for writing and finishing!
EllezBellz chapter 16 . 5/28
What a fantastic story. You're a very talented writer and story teller... xxxxxxx
snowwhitealice chapter 16 . 1/16
Incredible story! Very well done!
MyFirstistheFourth chapter 16 . 12/28/2014
Wonderful story! I completely Loved taking Jareth totally out of his own world and power in order to get to know Sarah. :) I had worried about the angst but it really was the good kind of angst and the romance/relationship built beautifully. You should get it up on AO3 sometime and expand that first time scene! ;) :-D Truly very enjoyable! I shall congratulate Lattelady for another great rec as I congratulate you for the Fabulous imagination and writing! :)
Guest chapter 16 . 12/14/2014
Lovely story! Well written and refreshing, thank you! _
Maria chapter 16 . 11/18/2014
I've been a fan of your HG/SS stories for many years, and I discovered your Labyrinth stories about a year ago but just realized I've never reviewed those.

I've read this story at least 10 times now. The details, back story, and realistic dialogue you created are a joy to read. THANK YOU a million times for this. It's...perfect.
Liz chapter 16 . 10/9/2014
Total cups of tea: 24

Total showers: 11.5

Well, if nothing else, we have two very hydrated and well-scrubbed characters. Thanks for the enjoyable read!
Liz chapter 15 . 10/9/2014
Cups of tea consumed: 2
Running total: 24

Showers taken: 1
Running total: 11.5
Liz chapter 14 . 10/9/2014
Cups of tea consumed: 0
Running total: 22

Showers taken: 0
Running total: 10.5

Too much drams for cleanliness!
Liz chapter 13 . 10/9/2014
Cups of tea consumed: 0
Running total: 22

Showers taken: 1
Running total: 10.5
Liz chapter 12 . 10/9/2014
Cups of tea consumed: 4 (OMG and honeycakes!)
Running total: 22

Showers taken: 1 and some water on the face
Running total: 9.5
Liz chapter 11 . 10/9/2014
Cups of tea consumed: 0
Running total: 18

Showers taken: 3
Running total: 8.5
Liz chapter 10 . 10/9/2014
Cups of tea consumed: 2 (but also muffins!)
Running total: 18

Showers taken: 1
Running total: 5.5
Liz chapter 9 . 10/9/2014
Cups of tea consumed: 4
Running total: 16

Showers taken: 0
Running total: 4.5
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