Reviews for The Enticement
MarbleGlove chapter 16 . 11/17
this is a fabulous story. I love the world building and the characters and their interactions.
BT chapter 16 . 11/12
I have just finished "The Enticement" and I just wanted to say thank you for sharing your talent with us. It was a great story. I enjoyed your portrayal of Sara and Jareth, and I particularly liked Jareth's sudden realization of his love for Sarah.
SKY UNICORN chapter 16 . 10/27
I love this story! thank thank thank you for writing it!
BrilliantLady chapter 16 . 8/23
Marvellous! Thanks for sharing your story. :) I'm glad Sarah didn't forget about her friend Gary, in the end.
BrilliantLady chapter 13 . 8/23
Alas, no snowbound snuggles for me to read! Ah well. I'm very much enjoying the story all the same. :) I do wonder why Jareth hasn't had any problems with touching iron since the earlier chapters? The cabin still has plenty (such as the corkscrew he used).
BrilliantLady chapter 7 . 8/23
*lol* Excellent evasive answer, Sarah! "No, I wouldn't care to explain this." Brilliant.
BrilliantLady chapter 5 . 8/23
I think we can all foresee the huddled-together-for-warmth moment coming up in the future for them as they're snowed in. I think I'll be disappointed if there *isn't* one, in fact! *lol* Old tropes can still be the best.
BrilliantLady chapter 1 . 8/23
Nice start!
Trinasaur chapter 16 . 7/25
Scattered, you are the best. I read this story ten years ago, and just read it again. Still a top fave. Sequel!
Lylabeth1 chapter 16 . 7/19
Have no idea where you've disappeared to but I'm sure you've moved far past reading these reviews. I just have to say if u ever return I hope you'll know I thought this one of the best Labyrinth fan fics I've ever read. Thanks so much for such a good story.
Roksolana chapter 16 . 2/14
I really like the story. You are such a talented writer!
HuntressXHunter chapter 16 . 1/31
That was actually nice that Jareth didn't forget about Richard the third
CuppaTea13 chapter 16 . 10/31/2016
Just read through this whole story in a day- and it is something else. Really, amazingly written. At first I wasn't sure I'd be able to handle reading about Jareth in the real world (for lack of a better term) for an extended period of time without getting bored or having it feel like a trope, but you did this so wonderfully, I couldn't stop reading. Seriously- excellent work.
palmtreehead chapter 16 . 8/24/2016
Wow, can't believe you wrote 'The Enticement' so quickly. Well-written and again I like that you give Jareth the wisdom you'd hope one would gain after being alive so long, while keeping his fae character intact. I enjoyed his connection to King Richard as well, and you've made me feel like brushing up on my history knowledge! Thanks for sharing.
Rae Rowan chapter 13 . 7/5/2016
Brilliant story, best Labyrinth fan fic ive seen so far! I hope to be reading when Sarah's Queen in the Labyrinth! Thank you so much for doing this!
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