Reviews for The Enticement
CrystalBalloon chapter 1 . 1/11
This is the fanfic that made me finally want to write my own. So good I don't know how you're not a published writer! I adored this
tadah2 chapter 16 . 1/3
First, you did something that most Labyrinth authors can't or won't do-you wrote a not-rapist Jareth, so kudos for that. The rest of the story is very good, too. You wrote her a life that's easily left behind in favor of the Underground. You gave conflict and consequences. Very good.
tadah2 chapter 1 . 1/3
You know what I like? A Labyrinth fic where Jareth isn't a rapist. Good job so far!
fruitsmoothy chapter 16 . 11/25/2015
:D this was a fun read! Thank you for sharing your talents as an author. You have given me a wonderful few nights of reading :D
babyvfan chapter 16 . 10/3/2015
This was a seriously amazing story. I loved it
babyvfan chapter 12 . 10/3/2015
I'll be damned. I feel so bad for him
babyvfan chapter 11 . 10/3/2015
I think this has to be my favorite chapter out of the story so far
babyvfan chapter 9 . 10/3/2015
Awwwww. That's all I can say
babyvfan chapter 8 . 10/3/2015
The wonders and great beauty of a book. How it can easily bring people together.
babyvfan chapter 2 . 10/3/2015
She drew his bedchamber? Oh dear god, I loved to see how the hell she's gonna explain this
babyvfan chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
Oh shit. Jareth with no magic? Now things are really getting interesting
Ology chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
Love this
Erin chapter 1 . 7/29/2015
Random note: Blue Mountain Lake is great. I'm staying there right now! Have you ever actually been? It's a lovely, tiny little town.
Zatara1324 chapter 16 . 6/10/2015
What a lovely story! I liked the direction you took it in; Sarah was the one who had to work for Jareth's affection instead of the opposite, which was refreshing. Also, loved the realism. They seemed a lot more like normal people than I'm used to, and that was great too! Arguing without too much arguing. Ahh (: Thanks for writing and finishing!
EllezBellz chapter 16 . 5/28/2015
What a fantastic story. You're a very talented writer and story teller... xxxxxxx
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