Reviews for The Enticement
rosesnblueberries chapter 16 . 9/6
This is absolutely amazing!
Squidwardswife chapter 16 . 9/1
Can some one find the smut scene? I cant find it anywhere
melodiabeaupel chapter 16 . 8/9
I heard a song recently that made me think of this fic. /bardic/titles-2/the-last-plantagenet/
Kindle-the-Stars chapter 16 . 7/6
I very much enjoyed reading this story, you are a talented writer!
Liv chapter 5 . 7/3
Hehe I'm not sorry her and Jareth are going to be trapped together in a cabin because of a snow storm.
Liv chapter 4 . 7/3
lol Sarah saying she doesn't need to guess at the size of his dick.
Uh oh to the iron poisoning. I do however love the excuse for them to be shut away in an isolated cabin together.
Liv chapter 3 . 7/3
I'm not usually a fan of enemies to lovers however I do like this antagonistic back and forth with them both.
Haha I can't wait to see what snooping Jareth gets up to.
Liv chapter 2 . 7/3
Oh damn I'm loving the fact Sarah is unconsciously drawing scenes and places from the Labyrinth.
The explanation for why Jareth has to take a wished away child is a good detail.
Liv chapter 1 . 7/3
I like that painting Jareth's portrait becomes an impulse that must be satisfied.
A fan of the Labyrinth being sentient creature speaking to both Jareth and Sarah.
oooh! Is Jareth going to have to learn to live like a human?
Jayne chapter 16 . 2/2
OMFG deffo one of the best story on here! I know you wrote this a long awhile ago but Bravo! Thanks for sharing a wonderful gift.
YEB chapter 16 . 8/17/2019
Not sure if you see reviews on this story anymore, Scattered Logic, but I binged on this one in one sitting! I love how you gave Jareth vulnerabilities and made him human by taking away his powers-it gave a fresh approach to to the Jareth/Sarah dynamic and made their evolving relationship much more realistic. As old as this story is, I still wanted to express appreciation for you sharing with us, and for keeping this story up for all these years.
ashez2ashes chapter 1 . 7/22/2019
Uh, wouldn't Sarah's deepest desire be her family NOT being dead? Just saying...
saynventeen chapter 16 . 7/22/2019
Hi even though my comment will be 16 years late, I just want to say that this story is a Breath of fresh air from stories where Jareths already in love with Sarah.

Anyway, loved your story! ;)
Margot Grazyna chapter 16 . 2/27/2019
Przeczytałam , będzie mi bardzo brakować tej powieści, już żałuję że to koniec, pewnie będę do niej wracać co jakiś czas bo jest pochłaniająca , zaabsorbowała moją uwagę całkowicie. S była cudownie naturalna i bezpretensjonalna, J skomplikowany, po raz pierwszy to on był zależny od niej, ona dbała o jego potrzeby a nie na odwrót, był bezradny i zdany na jej pomoc, to odwrócenie ról było niesamowite. Kilkanaście lat po opublikowaniu tego opowiadania nadal jest porywające a ja mogę tylko żałować i pozostawać w rozczarowaniu że już nie piszesz na lff, Twoje opowiadania nadal żyją i zdobywają nowych zachwyconych nimi czytelników, jak Cię przekonać do dalszego pisania i publikowania ?
Margot Grazyna chapter 1 . 2/27/2019
dobrze się rozpoczyna, oboje są zaskoczeni, co zrobi Jareth bez swojej magii?
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