I have just finished "The Enticement" and I just wanted to say thank you for sharing your talent with us. It was a great story. I enjoyed your portrayal of Sara and Jareth, and I particularly liked Jareth's sudden realization of his love for Sarah.

I love this story! thank thank thank you for writing it!

Marvellous! Thanks for sharing your story. :) I'm glad Sarah didn't forget about her friend Gary, in the end.

Alas, no snowbound snuggles for me to read! Ah well. I'm very much enjoying the story all the same. :) I do wonder why Jareth hasn't had any problems with touching iron since the earlier chapters? The cabin still has plenty (such as the corkscrew he used).

*lol* Excellent evasive answer, Sarah! "No, I wouldn't care to explain this." Brilliant.

I think we can all foresee the huddled-together-for-warmth moment coming up in the future for them as they're snowed in. I think I'll be disappointed if there *isn't* one, in fact! *lol* Old tropes can still be the best.

Nice start!

Scattered, you are the best. I read this story ten years ago, and just read it again. Still a top fave. Sequel!

Have no idea where you've disappeared to but I'm sure you've moved far past reading these reviews. I just have to say if u ever return I hope you'll know I thought this one of the best Labyrinth fan fics I've ever read. Thanks so much for such a good story.

I really like the story. You are such a talented writer!

That was actually nice that Jareth didn't forget about Richard the third

Just read through this whole story in a day- and it is something else. Really, amazingly written. At first I wasn't sure I'd be able to handle reading about Jareth in the real world (for lack of a better term) for an extended period of time without getting bored or having it feel like a trope, but you did this so wonderfully, I couldn't stop reading. Seriously- excellent work.

Wow, can't believe you wrote 'The Enticement' so quickly. Well-written and again I like that you give Jareth the wisdom you'd hope one would gain after being alive so long, while keeping his fae character intact. I enjoyed his connection to King Richard as well, and you've made me feel like brushing up on my history knowledge! Thanks for sharing.

Brilliant story, best Labyrinth fan fic ive seen so far! I hope to be reading when Sarah's Queen in the Labyrinth! Thank you so much for doing this!

Thank you so much for writing such beautiful stories. They truly are amazing and so well written. Thank you.

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