Argh! Clifhanger! I hate clifthangers! Such a good story, I want more! More, more more! I'm hanging on by the egde of my seat!

Just saw your webpage, very awesome! I have one question, are you going to add more charachters or is it just gonna be Sarah and Jareth? Just wondering?

more more more more more more more more more more more and pne and on into infinity

I have been rather remiss in my reviewing duties, but one does run out of adjectives. This was an incredibly sexy chapter; the underlying emotion beneath the lust gave it a believable duality. Incredible, and I just have to wonder where you are going to take this story. Will it unfold in the Aldirondacks or the labyrinth if Jareth ever gets back there? Either way I am sure it will be great.

Good job,

Belladonna

NICE! You had me on the edge of me seat through that whole chapter. Hoo-boy, Sarah is in serious trouble. I can't wait to see him dissolve her resistance.

You rock!

-Jester :)

I like your writing, and I'm also jealous as hell. :)

There are very few writers who could drag me out of my current self-induced state of hibernation to actually write a review when I could just as easily procrastinate.

You're one of them.

God DAMN, woman! I'm already late for class, and you make me need a cold shower! _-

Love it. Love it so much. You're also giving me mad inspiration for the "Forfeit" sequel.

That is, if I ever freaking FINISH the thing. Ugh.

But. Your story. Is amazing. You should write more. You're obviously a superhuman being capable of updating at hideously quick rates. Eat more spinach or vitamins or whatever it is you're taking, because I want more more more now now now. That was so good. Oh my. Rendered incoherent by ubersexyRAWRJareth. M. M m.

I am a dangerous woman, half-crazed by writer's block and the recent events of my own life. And I'm weilding emoticons illegal in certain states. Give me what I want, woman!

Heehee.

Love you, love your story, and oh, it makes me so happy today. Will write more reasonably at a later date. Say, when you update again. Heh.

the tension mounts, both plot-wise and sexual. We all know that sara's dreams-those the labyrinth insist on granting her-include the LOVE of jareth, not just the sex, but when will jareth figure that out? (obvoiusly, that was a rhetorical question...) and when will sara finally tell jareth the whole truth? and what wil his reaction be? will he figure it out for himself, what she needs from him, or wil she have to tell him? can't wait for the next segment; i have to admit yours is the only fanfic i read so faithfully. beautiful style, of course-i've said it before but it bears repeating. again, i love the way you so incorporate the sly ways of the fey-the little "wager" of jareth's was beautifully crafted, weaving both his seduction and manipulation together wonderfully. thank you for continung to write; i look forward eagerly to the next chapter!

smile always,

fyrefly

Wicked! Really evil there. I love it. I love how sarah keeps hiding the fact that Jareth is there because she made a deal with the Labyrith and I love how Jareth is so confused most of the time. And that wager was priceless. Well done! More! Need more!

Oh dear. Sarah's right, she's in trouble. But only if he figures out that she wants love. If he's supposed to give her her dreams, then that includes loving her. This could turn out to be a long story. Jareth will have to believe in love. Wonderful! I like the tension between them. It's real, not a sudden jump from sort of trusting eachother to lovers. I really love how believable this story is. And it keeps getting better.

Yay! Oh, that was fun! Can't wait for more!

~Loves!~

You know, chapters like this are the reason why I consider you the best Labyrinth fic author ever. The story pulled me in to the point that I felt like I was waking up from a dream when the chapter ended. Bravo.

I hate that it always seems to take so much time for it to be friday.

wow, it's a fantastic story. Honestly, it's perfect. I'm absolutely hooked. You MUST post another chapter soon. If you don't, i'll die, I swear it, I will. XD

Hurray for Scattered Logic, the best Labyrinth writer! THis chapter is good because most people would have had Sarah give in to Jareth, but she didn't! You avoid cliches, unlike SOME people I know!