Did i mention i love your writing? *grins*

WOW

I can't wait for the next chapter

whoa

this sounds great

uh is jareth so mean? loves her? ;)

I love you writting! I only wish you updated more! You do the struggle between Jareth and Sarah so well, you can feel the tension as you read. Pure genius, let me know when you plan to update again!

Ah! That's great! ) I'm completely loving this story! Hopefully you'll update soon beacause it's absolutely wonderful!

I wonder when Jareth is going to find out about Sarah's paintings of him. I'm really looking forward to that. ) Can't imagine why. ;)

I can already tell that this one will be another delight from start to finish. Please keep going. I'm liking this sentient labyrinth quite a bit although I think it should hand Jareth a copy of Miss Manners. Sarah gets big points for keeping her cool. Just how WILL she explain that dashing portrait when Jareth finds it. Hmm? And he will find it won't he? (giggle)

Teehee!

I like it! Keep writing!

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see, um.

Oh, foof, I can't find it. Anyway, keep going and I'm bad at this reviewing stuff.

~Aly

"Some guys just can't hold their arsenic."

I love that last little bit! Sarah having visions of Jareth's bedroom-no hidden meaning there! Nope not at all!

Great story so far, but then I wouldn't expect anything less from you. I loved your last story and I'm falling in love with this one. Keep up the good work.

Oh, I'm so excited! You're starting another one. I can't wait to see where this goes. Its already extremely interesting. You've succeeded in doing what most author's fail at: pulling in the reader without giving away too much of the story. My only complaint is that you killed her family. Sadness is good, but some things are just a little too sad. The good by far outweighs the bad, so update soon!

I'm anxious to see where you're going with this. I really like what you've written so far and I'm sure that the next chapter will be just as wonderful.

SIDENOTE~ *YEAH! You're writing something new! (I almost expected you to wait a LONG time before posting a new one!)*

woo hoo! i'm so glad you started to write again. i really wanted a sequel to A Necessary Deception but this is bound to be just as good!

An excellent story thus far. I loved the way you gave the Labyrinth a voice. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.