Reviews for Two Worlds, One Future |
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![]() ![]() It's a shame this hasn't been updated in 2 years. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really hoping this story isn't dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am EXCEEDINGLY eager for more of this story in earnest. You have intrigued me DEEPLY with all intrinsic implications this will have and my higher curiosity how Artemis is tagged in as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting story. I'm not sure if you plan to continue it but I hope you do. One question I have about the pairing, will it be just a one time thing or will Wally, M'gann and Artemis be a actual three-way relationship? It would be interesting to see how that would effect episodes from the show and how other people, including the team and their respective families, would react to that kind of relationship. I've checked out some of your other so I know that you could write it very well. |
![]() ![]() This is a great story. Any chance for an update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You might get this a lot but you really have a gift when it comes to writing. I really love all your fictions. I just wanted to ask if you have a patreon cause I would totally support you. Thanks for the amazing stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damnit, I just love your writing. Good to see you return a bit. Also, are you sure you're not a Martian? You seem to have the understanding down pretty well. Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're alive! No, I haven't been checking your AFF or Ao3 accounts several times a week for the last several months, why do you ask? |
![]() ![]() I am in total awe of this chapter, not only that wally is getting m'gann for his own but the whole lemon experience was intense. Plz keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() I think you captured Barry's frustration well in this - most people would react similarly to him I'd imagine - but they're a few spellibg mistakes; "Barry" is sometimes spelt "Berry". There might be more but I'd have to read again. It might be a good idea - when your computer's fixed - to put all the chapters through a grammar/spelling checker and/or through an editor (be it yourself or another person) to fix any mistakes. Looking forward for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Es bueno saber que no te hemos perdido, y me alegra más saber que continuas con esta historia en particular, supongo que integrar elementos de justice league te dará más con que trabajar, también hace más difícil predecir la historia, por cierto técnicamente Wally no es sobrino de Barry sino de Iris, pero como prefieras. De alguna manera la de Batman fue la respuesta más predecible, lo cual también es curioso porque es Bruce quien más se entromete en los asuntos de todos, para saber pero no actuar salvo en emergencias. Tomando en cuenta lo volátil de la situación es bueno que fuera el marciano el involucrado. De alguna manera, también es el comentario que esperaba de Oliver. Concuerdo con Batman que se desviaron bastante, con lo que se tardaron en discutir sobre la masa alienígena alojada en el cerebro de Wally, pero sigue sin resolverse ¡¿Qué hace esa cosa?!, en fin es bueno que lograran calmar los ánimos, además de saber que cooperaran con sus protegidos si lo necesitan (Qué lo harán), sobre todo porque dada la situación de ambos estoy bastante seguro de que necesitaran un patada (literal o figurativa) en la dirección correcta para empezar a resolver esto. Supongo que no será fácil explicarle a la madre de Megan, pero dada su propia conexión con un marciano blanco al menos Jhon tendrá un punto de partida, me sorprendió lo último, casi esperaba que hablara de su hermana, pero supongo que habría sido muy predecible, aún así plantea muchas nuevas preguntas, ojala puedas actualizar pronto aunque entiendo que tendrás problemas por lo de t computadora y tus otras historias, en todo caso. Hasta la próxima, en cuanto puedas |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving this fic. What do you think would have happened if J'onn was asked if M'gann (after he mentioned her displeasure of the whole situation) have though of harming Wally for the whole situation? |
![]() ![]() Glad to hear you're alive and well. I really liked the debate between the Justice League Council. Sad to hear your PC's went to fritz. Looking forward for the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was great on the other hand it feels like filler because Mgann and wally weren't shown...but this was an important part. It shows how other people are reacting to the bonding |
![]() ![]() Any chance this'll be updated? |