Reviews for Before The Dawn
silverrain-shiningsun chapter 38 . 5/15
That was a very satistfying chapter?
silverrain-shiningsun chapter 35 . 5/14
Sooo good!
silverrain-shiningsun chapter 31 . 5/14
That was heartbreaking.
silverrain-shiningsun chapter 25 . 5/14
Oh boy, as soon as you said red hair I knew what was happening.
silverrain-shiningsun chapter 20 . 5/13
Honestly, why tf eould ned dayne be named that?
silverrain-shiningsun chapter 10 . 5/13
Ha! That was great!
silverrain-shiningsun chapter 7 . 5/12
Awwwww
silverrain-shiningsun chapter 1 . 5/12
A great first chapter!
Robert Doran chapter 4 . 5/5
The revelation always touches my heart.I am an old hippy kind of man and a tear trickled down my you realize how powerful that last sentence is? Well done:)
adamskelton1993 chapter 5 . 3/14
your lyanna is a terrible mother i mean ive read similar stories to yours were she marries barthaeon after reagar dies and when she hears of jons treatment at the hands of caitlyn and greyjoy you can strongly feel how she is feeling and how she detests robert that it actually is a marriage of connivance for her but in yours its like hey im your mum and oh yeah the guy that killed your dad yeah im with him now but hes not really that much of a bad guy so yeah im queen and your a bastard so get over it.
and dont get me started on the nights watch theres no way a proper mother wants that for her son
rob chapter 1 . 3/9
One thing I do write is that Cat dies giving birth an Ned finds out and Ash and Ned get married.
DarkJon chapter 41 . 8/20/2023
Tolle das Lyanna Jon/Margaery ist genauso schlecht wie Jon/Dany.
AraelDranoth chapter 3 . 11/9/2022
Great stuff. A solid chapter although I wonder where you will take things?
AraelDranoth chapter 2 . 11/9/2022
Brilliant stuff. A good, solid read. Well done!
AraelDranoth chapter 1 . 11/9/2022
I am intrigued. There were a few, minor spelling mistakes but nothing to be concerned over. I think this could be a fun read.
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