Useless Cunt, stop writing, jump.

And I quit. Congratulations your the first author to ever make me hate Lyanna. So this is going to sound crazy but Lyanna was never under any obligation to marry Robert and nobody would have other thought twice had she had a close relationship with her motherless nephew so she can spout all the bullshit ahe wants about it being for protecting Jon but she jumped into bed with the man that murdered her husband and abandoned her child to be queen to the whore king. Fuck this version of Lyanna and fuck this author

Any story that has Robert and Lyanna together makes me throw up in my mouth. This could have been easily solved by just having Robert marry Cercie again. Then Lyanna would be free to be Jons aunt. I swear if Lyanna goes and hops into bed with Robert i will instaquit this story. That would be a fun talk for Jon when he geta older. Hey Jon your actually the son of Rhagar Targaryen and your aunt Lyanna. Now shes riding on the fat cock of the man that murderd your father so have fun at the nights watch

I grew up as an airforce dad got us up at the crack of dawn or earlier when we would make a long drive accross last chapter Lya waking up Jon reminded me of this.:)

I'm enjoying this story so far, very well written and I'm curious as to Jon's dragon eggs, and where this story goes as the Lannisters have no claim to the throne in this version.

One thing I've noticed that bugs me is Joffrey Lannister. Surely he'd be known by another name, his (supposed) father's name. Out of curiosity, who did Cersei marry instead of Robert?

Stop writing, you retard shit

That was a very satistfying chapter?

Sooo good!

That was heartbreaking.

Oh boy, as soon as you said red hair I knew what was happening.

Honestly, why tf eould ned dayne be named that?

Ha! That was great!

Awwwww

A great first chapter!

The revelation always touches my heart.I am an old hippy kind of man and a tear trickled down my you realize how powerful that last sentence is? Well done:)