Great stuff. A solid chapter although I wonder where you will take things?

Brilliant stuff. A good, solid read. Well done!

I am intrigued. There were a few, minor spelling mistakes but nothing to be concerned over. I think this could be a fun read.

Wait, so Robert and Lyanna have no children?

No, Jon, I AM your mother

What a dumb fucking story. She runs away from Robert then she’s going to marry him after he kills her husband and she can no longer call her son her own like no matter what is happening that’s just fucking stupid like no is going to do that. Every one would rather kill there selfs then to have to give up there kid and marry someone they don’t like. She didn’t like him so much that it started a war. Like what after you have her agree to that the story’s over because if you were that kid you wouldn’t be happy when you find out your moms nothing more then a little bitch

Schon wieder ist genauso eine schlechte Paarung wie ihn mit Dany paaren.

Who says that John reacted like this, some kind of story is described, then in my opinion it's even very weakly remember yourself at 15 when your hormones are naughty to the fullest and then the woman you thought was your aunt tells him that she is his mother and that she actually left him and is married to the killer of his biological father, I am already 20 and I imagined myself in such a situation and I can say with confidence that the very minimum. I'll call this woman
with unpleasant words, after I send her to hell, and I myself will run away from home to hell, and only after a few months, when all emotions will settle down. And the impression will dissipate. I'll think it over more or less.

i don't mean to be harsh, but did lyanna really left her son for fifteen years!? isn't she a loving mother!

Bueno tengo un poco de enojo con Lya si tan solo hubiera hecho las cosas medio bien Ned pudo haber sido feliz con Ash pero ya no importa me encanta que viva y pueda ver crecer a su hijo

Oh please let there be a sequel!

This story is good enough with the exception of Jon being a whiny little bitch.

He called Ghost to HEEL Not heal. The war of the Roses ending. Neat.

Sanyra

...Lad6 Stark who BARELY acknowledged him... Not barley.! Barley is fod/grain !