Reviews for Before The Dawn
Guest chapter 1 . 6/6
Useless Cunt, stop writing, jump.
Church21 chapter 3 . 2/12
And I quit. Congratulations your the first author to ever make me hate Lyanna. So this is going to sound crazy but Lyanna was never under any obligation to marry Robert and nobody would have other thought twice had she had a close relationship with her motherless nephew so she can spout all the bullshit ahe wants about it being for protecting Jon but she jumped into bed with the man that murdered her husband and abandoned her child to be queen to the whore king. Fuck this version of Lyanna and fuck this author
Church21 chapter 2 . 2/12
Any story that has Robert and Lyanna together makes me throw up in my mouth. This could have been easily solved by just having Robert marry Cercie again. Then Lyanna would be free to be Jons aunt. I swear if Lyanna goes and hops into bed with Robert i will instaquit this story. That would be a fun talk for Jon when he geta older. Hey Jon your actually the son of Rhagar Targaryen and your aunt Lyanna. Now shes riding on the fat cock of the man that murderd your father so have fun at the nights watch
Robert Doran chapter 8 . 10/26/2024
I grew up as an airforce dad got us up at the crack of dawn or earlier when we would make a long drive accross last chapter Lya waking up Jon reminded me of this.:)
King Steve chapter 21 . 9/21/2024
I'm enjoying this story so far, very well written and I'm curious as to Jon's dragon eggs, and where this story goes as the Lannisters have no claim to the throne in this version.

One thing I've noticed that bugs me is Joffrey Lannister. Surely he'd be known by another name, his (supposed) father's name. Out of curiosity, who did Cersei marry instead of Robert?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2024
Stop writing, you retard shit
Aria of the Rainwood chapter 38 . 5/15/2024
That was a very satistfying chapter?
Aria of the Rainwood chapter 35 . 5/14/2024
Sooo good!
Aria of the Rainwood chapter 31 . 5/14/2024
That was heartbreaking.
Aria of the Rainwood chapter 25 . 5/14/2024
Oh boy, as soon as you said red hair I knew what was happening.
Aria of the Rainwood chapter 20 . 5/13/2024
Honestly, why tf eould ned dayne be named that?
Aria of the Rainwood chapter 10 . 5/13/2024
Ha! That was great!
Aria of the Rainwood chapter 7 . 5/12/2024
Awwwww
Aria of the Rainwood chapter 1 . 5/12/2024
A great first chapter!
Robert Doran chapter 4 . 5/5/2024
The revelation always touches my heart.I am an old hippy kind of man and a tear trickled down my you realize how powerful that last sentence is? Well done:)
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