Reviews for Before The Dawn
MENTALASYLUMPATI chapter 1 . 2/23/2021
HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHA LOOK AT ALL THIS PISS ITS LITERALLY FUCKING INUNDATING YOUR GARVE FUCK YOU HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA
CBAer chapter 1 . 2/23/2021
Guest chapter 6 . Aug 1, 2017
I want to like it but Lyanna seems so standoffish with her love for Jon. Basically chose the title of queen over raising him
LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ANOTHER FELLOW INTELLECTUAL IM PISSING ON HER GRAVE FUCK THAT BITCH AND FUCK ALL THE ADULTS IN THIS STORY
c4nC3r patient chapter 1 . 2/23/2021
6 FT DEEP AS I PISS AND SHIT ON THIER GRAVES HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
CancerHaver chapter 7 . 2/23/2021
lyanna rhaegar and robert 6 ft deep as i piss on their graves WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
c4nC3r patient chapter 6 . 2/23/2021
nah man i cant keep reading fuck this gonna read a story where fucking ramsay kills all these retards need god king ramsay and his deformed babies fast cant keep reading this shite
Guest chapter 5 . 2/23/2021
roberts assassins to kill his beloved XDDDDDDDDDDDD cant take it anymore hahahahahahahahHAHAHAHAHhah psychotic break i need to be locked up finna streak in the fucking snow im fucking losing it HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHha all these fucking excuses dont tilt me man
c4nC3r patient chapter 5 . 2/23/2021
awwwwwwww how sweet he was abandoned by his mother... how GRATEFUL should he be hahahahahahahahahahahahahhhahaha yeah man idk anymore lots of fucking bullshit just give him a few days to fuck off and process what hes heard instead of this trash. hes just heard that not only is he not his fathers son, but hes also not a bastard whos mother fucking abandoned him, who gives a shit about the conditions in which the previous happened, he was fucking abandoned by his mother
CancerHaver chapter 5 . 2/23/2021
show no emotion, its just my fucking son, who gives a second shit about him XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD fuck offffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff cancerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
JonSnowLover69 chapter 3 . 2/22/2021
" lya no tears please" man the only one whos going to be fucking crying here is mytself im losing my fucking mind she hasnt seen her fucking son, whom she was never allowed to treat as her own child due to x or y reason, in at least more than half a decade because she fucked off in order to protect him im fucking deranged man i cannot take it anymore literally ticks me the fuck off i go search every fucking where for jon x lyanna mother-son relationship (no targ shit fuck that XD) and all i get is this fucking sad shit man how fucking depraved do you have to be to only write about her ghost swear ive never seen a proper relationship bw my brotha (cant say n word) and his motha whom hes fucking yearned for his entire fucken life i cba anymroe still gonna read this cuz its not fucking shit but mannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn please i beg just once allow my bitch to raise my brudda in peace let her fuck off across the world and live a peaceful existence
SiriusBlackHeir chapter 8 . 2/6/2021
So lyanna never gave robert any children-and that serves the same destabilising purpose as the twins' relationship in canon. Lysa still killed jon Arryn because he wanted to foster Robin and littlefinger is probably the one who encouraged her to do it, while blaming the Lannisters to sway possible suspicion from them both like in canon. However the Lannisters would have no tangible reason to kill jon arryn, so why would they bother?
In canon it makes more sense because cersei is queen and is passing her children off as baratheon, but here there are no apparent motives to do that.
saramurakaz chapter 41 . 1/23/2021
Love the series and the build up is really great. Hope there is a sequel to this and this is definitely a good is not better Fanfic I've had read. Definitely going to re-read it and hoping a sequel is coming out
nerdwarf chapter 41 . 12/27/2020
Loved it.
Igniferroque chapter 26 . 12/12/2020
It has taken me at least three reads to note Jon’s vision to Illyrio. It may have been a bit too subtle.

I don’t believe at any point during their initial search did they check with the Martells. Given the budding relationship between Sansa and Trystane, I’d think it would be the first place they’d look. Unless you had them leave already and I missed the mention of it.

Your stories make for good comfort reading; at four stories, I believe you’re the author I’ve bookmarked the most.
Tohka123 chapter 41 . 11/20/2020
Really enjoyed the up the hard work
Matt-Jackson2000 chapter 41 . 9/16/2020
Great story! Love reading it
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